A Salted Fish In the Second Element

Chapter 123: An Yilun's opinion

"Kun Hanyu, I have read the part you sent me." During class, An Yilun, who had finished reading the part, also came to Hanyu's seat and said to Hanyu.

"How is it?" Hanyu asked expectantly.

"It feels...somewhat ordinary." An Yilun said to Hanyu after considering his words.

"Ah, is that so?" Hanyu became a little disappointed after hearing An Yilun's answer. At the same time, I was thinking that the original system is not omnipotent.

An Yilun also saw Hanyu's loss, and after thinking about it, he decided to tell Hanyu his detailed feelings.

"How Hanyu-kun showed me... the writing still looks very good. And the conversation with the cherry blossom falling at a speed of five centimeters per second is also very interesting." An Yilun also found out the advantages of Chinese. Said.

"What else?" Hanyu heard some hope in his heart.

"However, beyond the speed of five centimeters per second, it doesn't feel very amazing. It gives me a pretty ordinary feeling. It may be because Hanyu-kun gave me too little part, and the story did not unfold. So I don't know what I will find later. It’s really hard for me to make too many comments."

After listening to An Yilun’s evaluation, Hanyu felt that he was quite pertinent. Indeed, because of his laziness yesterday, he didn’t write much content. Just relying on such a short story or two, he wanted to learn from An Yilun. There are also whimsical writings that get high reviews.

"So, Wang Jun, what kind of story is this?" Suddenly a girl's voice was inserted into the conversation between Hanyu and An Yilun.

"Ah! It's Kato. Whatever, I just wrote and played casually." Hanyu saw Megumi Kato and thought of it, and the other party sat at his table in front of him. As a result, I recently ignored her again, and now that she knew what I wrote, Hanyu became a little worried.

Now that the speed is five centimeters per second, it seems that the situation is a bit uncomfortable, so I can only offer the magic ** catalog, but Kato Kei knows that he wrote it, if I go to tell Misaka Mikoto and the others. So let Misaka Mikoto join the magic ** catalog, Hanyu is a little worried about what will happen.

So Hanyu looked at Kato Megumi solemnly and said to her.

"That Kato, don't tell anyone I write, I'm a bit embarrassed."

"Well, I won't tell other people. But I'm quite curious about the story written by Wang Jun." Kato Megumi felt that Hanyu should be really embarrassed to let others know, so she agreed very understandingly.

"Kun Hanyu, so why don't you tell me roughly how you plan to write the story, maybe I can give you some advice." An Yilun also suggested in due course.

Hanyu thought for a while, and felt that after such a long time of contact with An Yilun, Hanyu still believed in his character. So Hanyu felt that even if he told him, he would not come to plagiarize his creativity. As for Megumi Kato, Hanyu subconsciously ignored her.

So he also introduced the plot of five centimeters per second to An Yilun.

"I intend to start three consecutive short stories with a boy as the axis of the story. The first chapter, "Sakura Sho", describes the love mood of Kishu and Akari when they were young, and the day when they reunite. The second chapter "Astronaut" ", describes the life of Nobori and Akari from the perspective of Sumita Hanae, who has a good impression of Nobori who entered high school. The third chapter "5 Centimeters per Second" depicts the inner heart of Nobori and Akari when they grow up. All sorts of hesitation.” Hanyu paused a little while speaking, and took a drink.

"Yeah, yeah. Go on." An Yilun also listened to Hanyu's description seriously and motioned for him to continue.

"First of all, you have seen part of the first story. According to my plan, I am going to..."

Hanyu eloquently introduced the general content of his story and his own writing ideas, and An Yilun and Kato Kee were listening to Hanyu's explanation with serious expressions. Did they nod their heads and express their admiration for Hanyu's ingenious arrangements.

"At the end of the story, I intend to return Guishu to the place where Mingli asked him about the speed of five centimeters per second. There is a tall cherry blossom tree by the railroad, with petals flying down slowly. Let him remember that question. When Guishu passed the railroad tracks, he passed by a woman, and suddenly he realized that the woman might be reasonable. So when he walked completely through the railroad, he slowly turned to look at the woman. She also turned slowly. When they came, their eyes crossed. At the moment when their hearts and memories were about to boil, the passing train blocked their vision. When the story is here, I intend to end it."

"Ah, is that over? I want to continue listening." When the story came to an abrupt end, Kato Megumi felt a little regretful.

"Kun Hanyu, write it out!" After listening to Hanyu's description, An Yilun put his hands on Hanyu's shoulders and said solemnly to Hanyu.

"Huh? Didn't you say that this story was ordinary before? Didn't it become unusual after listening to me telling the outline of the story?" Hanyu also asked An Yilun with a little astonishment.

"No, this story is still very ordinary. But after listening to your description, I have to be ordinary but refreshing, ordinary, but endless aftertaste." An Yilun also paused after speaking, seeming to want to think about what vocabulary should be used. To express your feelings.

"The story I'm talking about is not as attractive as the stories I have seen. There is no exaggerated setting, no extra tortuous development, and no **** plot. It is just like ordinary people. Life is the same."

An Yilun also clenched his fists.

"But, because of this. It's completely different from those coquettish **** outside! Hanyu-kun!" This An Yilun also yelled.

Suddenly everyone in the class was attracted by Hanyu, especially those girls who looked at An Yilun with contempt.

"Hush! Be quiet! Be quiet!" Hanyu hurriedly tugged at An Yilun's clothes, telling him not to speak so loudly.

"Ah, sorry. I can't help it, I can't help it." An Yilun also touched her head in embarrassment, then lowered her voice and continued.

"Wang Jun’s story doesn’t want other loves to make people feel distanced. Although I have not reached my age and have never experienced this kind of thing, I always feel that Wang Jun’s story happened either to me or to myself. From someone you know. It feels very close to me." Kato Hui took the opportunity to mad at her feelings.

"And Hanyu-kun's choice of ending is also good~lightnovelpub.net~ Mingli finally meets Takashu, what will happen to the two in the end? An open ending makes people think a lot."

"Haha...Is that so?" In fact, Hanyu intends to write according to the ending of the movie. I think it would be more interesting to disappear after the train, but since Kato Ke is also there, Hanyu changed to an open ending. , Lest Kato Megumi feel uncomfortable after listening.

"So, Hanyu-kun. Please write it down, please. I believe that with your writing, this story will be very good."

"Haha, isn't it? Then I must try to write it out." Hanyu, who was affirmed, regained a little confidence again.

"Wang Jun, if you have written it, can you show it to me?" Kato Megumi asked.

"Don't worry, you must show it to Kato after you write it." Hanyu bared his teeth happily and assured Megumi Kato.

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