Summary at the end of the paper and a day off

  The fourth volume, which started on October 10th, has lasted 70 days so far, and the blood diamond chapter with a total of 410,000 words is over.

  On average, 5,800 words are updated every day, um... a little bit backward, but overall it is still qualified, beauties, don’t make up rumors about me, how can I lichee like this?

Having said that, I wrote the first half of the Blood Diamond chapter very smoothly, and I was very satisfied, but from the middle, I felt a little rushed. On the one hand, I felt that the rhythm was too slow, and on the other hand, I felt bored and dozed off when I wrote it... But Overall, I feel that writing is smoother and better than the Obsidian chapter.

   If the full score is 10, I think it can be scored as 7 points.

  However, when I read the previous article myself, I did find many problems, including too few players, Rafa’s death was too hasty, and some plots were too dry, etc…

More than one beautiful woman has reported that the plot written by radish is too tight and hasty, and it looks tired... It may be that my subjective thinking is too strong. After all, when I was reading a book, I encountered long paragraphs of hydrology. I will be very disgusted, and when I write the plot, I always think about not being able to do hydrology, and try to make sure that there is something to read in each chapter.

   But now it seems that many things are like [juggling artist], too much is too much, you should learn to choose and balance... Only then can you become a qualified novelist.

   If you have any suggestions and comments, you can also leave a message to tell me. The interaction of readers is also the fuel for my progress, thank you.

   Let’s talk about the story again.

  The thing that satisfied Carrot the most in this volume was actually the death of Byerswolf.

  Because this was already written in the original outline...even the black knight was supposed to fall in the last volume, but ended up living in this volume.

  For this role, Luo Bo even wrote a biography for him, but maybe due to poor writing skills, he couldn’t write touching stories and lines...

  Version 1.0 is over. The next step may be the transition period of the version, or version 2.0. I haven’t thought about it yet. Wait until tomorrow to conceive it.

  The status of the past two months has been ups and downs, and I also apologize to all the beauties who followed up.

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  Finally, Carrot asks everyone for a day off to prepare the outline for the fifth volume.

   I won’t make too many announcements here, because the plot has not been sorted out yet, but the general trend should be that a high-ranking member joins the team, and Jack begins to prepare for being promoted to a saint, and gradually expands more worldviews and maps.

  Finally, at the end, thank you all beauties for your support, it is you who let the radish eat this meal.

  Now the score of this book is 4,500 average orders, which is more than doubled from the 1,830 first orders when it was first launched. Thank you very much.

   There are also two new leaders in the past two months, which have added a lot of motivation to the carrot.

   But the addition may not be available in a short time, I am very sorry.

  Let’s continue to work hard in the next volume!

   Radish Ball December 19, 2022 22:13

  (end of this chapter)