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Chapter 193: Lulu Xiu Chapter 1: The Day of the Devil

   "It's okay, there is nothing comparable, neither is of the same type."

   Su Chen doesn't want to be so simple to use the difference to measure the two works.

Yinsha held her chin in her hands and thought for a while: "However, although "Lelouch the Rebellious" is a mecha type, from the perspective of your character, Lelouch is a wise character, so this work is not also a wise one. Fight?"

   "That's how it is said..."

Su Chen sipped his lipstick tea and continued: "But the two are essentially different. The wits of this work will not be as meticulous as "Death Note". After all, it is not suspenseful. I will focus on the plot. of."

   "Oh." Yinsha nodded without understanding.

   Feng Yu didn't raise his head, holding the manuscript of the first chapter, carefully reading it over and over again.

   from time to time, the corners of his mouth still show an idiotic smile, which is horrible.

   She seemed to like the role of Lu Lu Xiu at first sight.

   This is also understandable. After all, Lu Lu Xiu’s abilities are really cool. With a flash of eyes, he can command the person he is looking directly at. It is invincible. Coupled with the handsome appearance and super high IQ, it is indeed very popular with the girls in the second grade.

   In the animation of the year, for some reason, it also added a "feminine" label. It may be that this tall and thin style of painting is more attractive to girls.

   But anyone who reads it will know.

This work is not just the kind of superficial work that only looks at the face. On the contrary, Lelouch's plot is simply extremely exciting. The contradictions of various characters and the plots of various blades can be made into several movies. Up.

   On the other hand, compared with the wits of "Death Note", the details of Lelouch’s wits are mostly taken in one stroke, focusing on the creation of compact plots and vivid characters.

   After all, Lulu Xiu's golden hands are similar to superpowers, and Ye Shenyue only uses foreign objects to commit crimes with high intelligence. The development direction of the two intellectual battles is completely different, and there is no comparison.

   If Ye Shenyue is an indifferent conspirator behind the scenes, then Lulu Xiu is a resourceful general who has both the wisdom of tactics and the ability to organize and command terror.

   The official announcement of the original game clearly stated that Lelouch could think about 13 different things in one second. From this, we can see how terrifying this character like the Great Devil is.

   After making a few small changes to the comic, Su Chen threw the comic to the editor Xinlan’s mailbox for her review.

   But at the same time, he also printed two drafts of the first episode and gave them to Otosha and Fengyu, so that they could master this painting method as soon as possible.

   Xinlan of Penguin Comics also quickly noticed the news from Su Chen on the computer.

   "Rebellious Lelouch?"

   Xinlan tilted her head and looked at the document sent by the other party.

   "The name is so so-so."

   She mumbled and turned on the computer, and after sending "This girl received it" to Su Chen, she opened the manuscript and started reviewing it.

   First of all, I can't say that I have excellent painting skills.

  Opening a new work, Mao Xuewang also began to show off an unprecedented new painting technique, which is completely different from Death Note and Xiaobui.

   Just relying on painting skills can conquer some readers, which is also one of Xinlan's most assured points.

   Then look at the content.

   The first chapter "The Day of the Devil's Birth" has a lot of pages, but not much content.

Compared with the realistic background of "Death Note", Lulu Xiu's worldview is obviously more ambitious, war, chaos, country, mecha, weapon, time, characters, etc... Too many words.

  Don't say anything else, just look at the characters. In the first chapter of the Death Note, the follow-up characters that appear will involve the plot, including Ye Shenyue, Ye Shenyue's family, and the **** of death Luc.

   can be counted.

Look at Lelouch, just the important person in the first chapter, there are too many to count, what is Xiali, Mire, Rival, Uncle Orange, Clovis, Suzaku, CC, Karen, Fan What you want... is all focused, and there will be more character-making scenes later.

   Xinlan moved the mouse and looked at it carefully.

   It can be seen that Mao Xuewang has constructed a very large background setting this time.

   But the story of the first episode is simple and clear.

Aside from the foreshadowing of the many characters that appeared, the protagonist Lulu Xiu was accidentally involved in a terrorist attack in the first episode. During the process, he encountered the mysterious girl CC and signed a contract with him. , Obtained the mysterious power of "absolute obedience" from the power of the king's power.

   The pretending to be pretentious and compelling, quite routine.

   may also be preconceived. Xinlangan feels that this familiar golden finger acquisition is a bit like Ye Shenyue.

   Of course, it's just a little bit like it can't be more.

   The process of Lu Lu Xiu's obtaining the gold finger was even more bumpy, and the paintings on the few pages that were opened were extraordinarily cool.

   At first glance, I have worked hard.

   It is estimated that Mao Xuewang himself wrote the pen himself - judging from Xinlan's insight, the other assistants can't draw this feeling.

   Generally speaking, it is much more attractive than the mediocre start of Death Note.

   At least Xinlan thinks so.

   ["You seem to have a reason to survive."

   The unfamiliar voice of the girl echoed in his mind.

   is incredible, like a dream.

   "You can live if you have power? This is a contract."

   "I give you strength, in exchange, you want to realize my wish."

   "If you sign a contract, although you can still survive in the world, you will follow a different principle from humans."

   "Different from legal principles, different from time, and different from life. Oh, Wang Zhili will eventually make you lonely, if you have this consciousness..."]

The lines in the comics are designed extremely exquisitely ~lightnovelpub.net~ It is just right and refreshing, mixed with a little second, and it also leaves a lot of suspense, so readers who see this will definitely be itchy. No way.

   It was a girl who had been shot at Tian Ling Gai and died, but she could hold Lu Lu Xiu's hand tightly and communicate with him in the spiritual world.

Finally, although the supernatural phenomena beyond the scope of understanding also surprised Lelouch, he had a psychological quality that was different from ordinary people. In addition, because of the critical moment of life and death, he also waved his hand and signed this contract. Acquired the so-called "absolute obedience" ability.

   In short, the plot before this is all a mystery.

   Xinlanzi carefully reviewed it several times, and then turned back here with endless aftertaste.

   It shouldn't be said, this paragraph of signing the contract is also too fascinating, showing the mystery of this undead girl to the fullest, and the later also reveals the domineering of Lu Lu Xiu who signed the contract.

   Such a wonderful first episode, even her trained editor can't help but applaud, and can't wait to see the second episode.

   So let alone those enthusiastic readers.

   is so handsome, high double-skilled, and the protagonist who has such a golden finger, the charm can make everyone who has seen it fall in love.

  ……

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