The content of the first volume comes to an abrupt end here.

　　 Yuzu took a deep breath.

　　 After reading it, how do you say it?

　　 She feels that this time, the other party's style has really changed a lot.

　　 is not as profound as the previous two works.

Although the friendship entanglement with these adolescent girls is very detailed, it seems too mediocre whether it is compared with the deep feelings in "Violet Evergarden" or the forgotten fate in "Your Name" No surprises.

　　 Of course, this does not mean that Su Chen's level has dropped.

　　 Mediocre is true, and mediocrity is the root of all stories.

　　 It’s just that the sudden change of style makes Yuzu quite uncomfortable.

　　 To talk about the good details in this work, as a discerning editor, she can list no fewer than ten.

　　 The little ghost who deserves the title of "Blade God of War", the inadvertent movements and expressions of the characters in the work, as well as their attitude portraying, undoubtedly make the characters more vivid and complicated.

　　 For example, after An Ming quarreled with Renta and left, he walked quickly until he stopped slowly, and then stared at his hands...

　　 Again like Renta, after encountering Axue's blow, when he uttered bad words at the face of the face, his eyes tilted slightly...

　　 The psychological dynamics and character characteristics of the characters expressed by countless subtle depictions, and the information leaked can be clearly and intuitively received by the audience.

　　 It is the mixing of these details in daily life that makes the story true and the character full of characters.

　　 After reading all the text of the first volume, Yuzi couldn't help but look up again, staring at Su Chen.

　　 "What do you always see me doing?"

　　 Su Chen looked at him disgustingly.

　　 It’s not good to review the manuscript and always look up at me...

　　 If you want to use beauty tricks, just say it straight.

　　 But I'm going to talk ahead, even if you post me upside down, I won't write an outline for you (seriously).

　　 "Your new work is really different from the previous ones."

　　 Yuzu sighed lightly, a little bit wondering how to describe it.

　　 Su Chen said half jokingly: "How to say? Is it inevitable?"

　　 "The fire should be able to fire..." Yuzu, "But, your work this time actually didn't involve plots such as stomachache, which makes me feel so unreal."

　　 A whole basket of blades are prepared for nothing.

　　 said, she also squeezed her face. This is the second time she has done this action today.

　　 "Shen Te has a stomachache, when did I write that kind of plot." Su Chen's face turned black.

　　 These few such excellent emotional works are actually called stomachaches by you?

　　 is too much!

anyway.

　　 The reason why the other party would tell him this way, he can probably guess it.

　　 After all, the first volume, which is the plot of the first half of the animation, is really nothing to look at. It's ordinary and ordinary, and it is slowly paving the way.

　　 If it weren't for Su Chen's fame, Yuzi would have thought it was a street work.

　　 Such an intimate plot of the work, Yuzu has nothing to point and evaluate.

After 　　, I took some time to determine the layout order of the illustrations and some precautions. After that, the publication was basically nailed down.

　　 When the pomelo goes back, he will contact the publisher, and the official release will be made as soon as possible.

　　—This is exactly what the editor-in-chief and all the high-level staff mean. For a super first-line writer of light novels like Mr. Xiaogui, the sooner it is released, the better.

　　 But Yuzi just came here today. According to the arrangement in advance, she will stay here for a period of time, which is the so-called inspection work.

　　The authors who can enjoy this treatment are rare.

　　 "Are you pretty big in this store?"

　　 After the audit, Yuzi stretched out and observed the situation in the lounge.

　　 From the configuration point of view, this lounge is actually more luxurious than the apartment she lives in at Magic City, which is really outrageous.

　　 Especially the bed.

　　 actually has a European-style single bed for sleeping, and a day bed for rest during the day.

　　 Not only that, a brand-new LCD TV, a household refrigerator, a solid wood wardrobe, a small coffee table, a solid wood table...

　　 Damn it, is this heaven?

　　 Feeling the soft touch of the sun bed, her fatigue made her want to lie down and get a good night's sleep.

　　 I rushed all the way, my neck and shoulders were already sore by the seat card of the plane.

　　 "This bed is really nice, I think I will sleep here at night."

　　 tentatively said to Su Chen, Grapefruit is already eager to try, and intends to lie down on the bed.

　　 Su Chen said without any fluctuations in his tone: "Oh, that's my bed. I can sleep there if I can't get home after working overtime."

"Eh?"

　　 Grapefruit was dumbfounded, and then sat up slightly embarrassed, his cheeks slightly hot, and a dry cough.

　　 "I lied to you, how can this shop have overtime work? Basically everything in this lounge is new." Su Chen gave a jovial smirk, "If you want to live, I have no objection."

　　 "Ahem, no need..." Grapefruit sounded like a mosquito.

　　 It's just a lounge, how could she really live here!

　　 looked a little embarrassed and moved away. Soon, a machine in the corner attracted Yuzu's attention.

　　 That is a pure black foot massager.

　　 This is a massage device used to relieve fatigue. It is about the size of a rice cooker. When the power is turned on, the switch is pressed, and the foot is extended inside, you can enjoy the pleasure of foot massage.

　　The rotating mechanical roller inside can massage the feet naturally and comfortably.

　　 is a decompression artifact for those social animals with excessive workload.

　　 "Hey, do you still have this thing?"

　　 pointed to the foot massager, grapefruit was a little tempted.

　　 She has used this machine once, and it is a rare and convenient machine for people like her who do not consume much on massage.

　　 Su Chen glanced in the direction pointed by the other party. It is said that this thing was bought by the store manager Xu early to prepare for the future prosperity of the store. What he said was to reward the employees.

　　 But in fact, this shop has never been prosperous at all. No one has lived in such a luxurious lounge, and it is even called a foot massager.

　　 Since the day after I bought it, the instrument has been in the corner to eat dust until now.

　　 "Oh, you said this? You can use it if you want. You are welcome, it is also new."

　　 So he responded casually and took out the instrument disapprovingly.

　　 her eyes flickered, and after pomelo was polite for a few times, she accepted it happily.

　　 Her workload in the past few days is not small, and it's really tiring, coupled with the rushing around the city.

　　 took off her slippers generously and put her foot into the instrument, then she turned on the power. U U Reading www.uukanshu.com

　　 buzzing—

　　 There is a slight vibration sound, which means that the instrument is working.

"Well-"

　　 The warm and comfortable touch makes the grapefruit intoxicated in an instant.

　　 Comfortable, comfortable.

　　 Su Chen opened another bottle of juice and chatted with each other one after another.

at the same time.

　　 What he never thought of was...

　　 Outside the door.

　　 Otosha and Fengyu were attracted by this unusual vibration, and crouched by the door with a full face.

　　 is like two spies sneaking into the enemy's interior.

　　 "This...what is this sound? No, it's not that, right?"

　　 Feng Yu lowered his voice, and his small face looked at Otosha in horror.

　　 The latter gave her a silent gesture, with a serious expression, at the same time his ears were close to the door panel, listening intently.

　　 Fengyu saw this, took a deep breath, learning the sound of yarn, and leaned firmly on the door.

　　 At the same time, her heart is still chanting "this is to worry about the teacher", "this is to worry about the teacher", "never eavesdropping", "never eavesdropping"...

　　...

　　

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