After Lu Ning drew "The Gate of Destiny Stones" by himself, the scoreboard has been significantly improved compared to before, and the person settings given are more proficient, even with the shadow of "The Gate of Destiny Stones" faintly. This shows that Lu Ning has gradually developed his own style.

The name of the comic is relatively long. It is called "Girls Traversing Parallel Worlds". From the name, it can be seen that this comic is different from other traditional comics. It takes girls as the first perspective.

Such works are very rare, because there are special magazines with girls as the first point of view. Usually, the readers of this kind of comics are mostly girl-oriented comics. The magazines are also called girls' magazines, such as "Girls' Century".

This type of work has more delicate emotions, and because it is a girl-oriented manga, there are more handsome guys.

But "ComicFuture" is a juvenile comic, and most of its readers are boys. Even if it is serialized by female cartoonists, most of the stories are described from the perspective of boys.

For example, "Girls Traversing Parallel Worlds", the title of the book shows that the perspective is girls. It is hard to say whether this kind of comics can attract readers.

Hook took out Fengyoujing and wiped his temples.

This comic must be focused on, otherwise, making a wrong judgment will not be very good for both teachers and the magazine.

"I said... Xiaoli..." Hook put away Fengyoujing and looked at Wu Xiaoli.

"Ok?"

"I want to ask you one thing... Um, have you seen this?"

Hook also knew that the answer was "yes," but he was still worried.

"Team leader, this is the final decision after two weeks of scrutiny with Teacher Xi Muhan." Wu Xiaoli said patiently.

"You know that "ComicFuture" is a boy manga, right?" Hook asked again.

"Of course." Wu Xiaoli nodded.

"That's good……"

After hearing the "yes" answer, Hook took a deep breath, and his eyes fell on him again.

Now that Wu Xiaoli knows this, he can watch it with confidence.

"The Girl Who Traversed Parallel Worlds" is about a girl named "Ange" who has always had a good impression of Wang He, a male classmate in the same class, but she is introverted and has never dared to confess to Wang He.

During a class trip, Anjie met Wang He on the beach, and the two smiled at each other.

Suddenly, there was a big wave on the beach. Before An Jie could run away, she and Wang He were involved in the big wave.

The sudden change made Hook's scalp numb, and he got a lot of goose bumps on his body.

This turning point came too fast. It's almost caught off guard.

The heroine died suddenly in the first episode? What is this God unfolding?

Wait, the title is "The Girl Who Crossed Parallel Worlds"... Isn't the heroine able to cross?

Hook turned to the next page again. Sure enough, Anjie opened her eyes. She was lying on the bed, and the alarm on the table displayed 6:30.

It turned out to be a dream.

An Jie quickly got dressed, washed and ate, and arrived at the school on the subway. During the preview, her eyes moved to Wang He, but there were other people sitting in Wang He's seat.

Until the end of the first class, Wang He still did not come.

"I just discovered that classmate Wang He's...seat...has been changed by the teacher." Anjie was embarrassed to directly ask why Wang He hadn't come, and could only inquire about the tablemate from other aspects.

The tablemate turned his head in surprise, looked at An Jie, and touched An Jie's forehead with his hand, "Are you having a fever."

"what's happenin?"

"Wang He is dead... passed away a year ago..."

After reading this, Hook was covered with goose bumps.

The plot seems to be plain, but the direction of the plot is somewhat unexpected.

This manga...something evil manga meaning.

Hook held his breath again and continued to look down.

An Jie thought that she was joking at the same table, and quickly asked about a few recent group activities, only to find that she denied them all at the same table.

An Jie was not reconciled. After returning home in the evening, she turned up the class photo. There was no Wang He in the photo.

Obviously... There is Wang He.

An Jie remembers very clearly that she had seen this class photo many times, and she even remembered Wang He's smile clearly.

Just when she was full of doubts, something suddenly slapped on the window. She tiptoedly opened the window, and suddenly curled herself up and stepped on the edge of the window. It was Wang He...

After reading the first episode, the countless reversals made Hook very addicted to it.

After that, the second and third words were to advance the story, and An Jie did pass through, because she could see what ordinary people couldn't see, the fairy. And from this, the plot began.

"How is it? Leader." Wu Xiaoli asked.

"Yes, the quality of the first episode is the highest, and the plots of the next two episodes are stable, and the world view is expanded, in line with the rhythm of comics..."

Wu Xiaoli nodded repeatedly, "I feel so too."

"But one thing...no, one thing to say, I don't think it's a little smooth." Hook hesitated.

"Huh? Is there?"

"It's not a big thing~lightnovelpub.net~ I just think that the first chapter has been reversed too much. If this is an evil manga, then this one has a wonderful opening, and it can even overwhelm everything except "" Manga, but obviously, this is not an evil manga. The manga introduces monsters, but the monsters are not directly related to Wang He's death... In fact, when a person dies, the atmosphere of the story becomes serious and depressing... Is it possible to use excuses such as transfer, otherwise, the tone of the story is too dark.

"Of course, I am not saying that there can be no dark tone, but that the tone should be laid out in the first sentence, which is not in line with the atmosphere of the second and third chapters, and it is easy to make readers feel like they have been fooled. Personal suggestion , To bring down the dark tone of the first episode a little bit."

Wu Xiaoli frowned, thinking about it carefully, and the whole atmosphere of the story, I have to say that what Hook said was reasonable, and the atmosphere in the first episode seemed too heavy compared with the following two episodes.

At that time, I just wanted to attract readers quickly, but I forgot that this manga is not an evil manga.

It's best to modify it again.

Wu Xiaoli took this point in her notes, and then asked: "Group leader, what are the shortcomings?"

"The other aspects are nothing. The overall quality is very high, which makes people want to read. However, it is quite difficult to observe the world from the perspective of a girl. I hope that the two teachers can create a wonderful work. The title...is it too long? We are not the editors of light novels, so there is no need for such a long name, right?"

"what?"

Hearing Hook's comment, Wu Xiaoli had a black line. She felt that this was the title of the book most relevant to the subject.

change name? What should it be called?

Wu Xiaoli scratched her head, it seemed that she could only discuss with Xi Muhan again.

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