Shen Xin was not surprised at all that Xi Muhan and Lu Ning's new work was taken back and revised.

Can "The Girl Who Crossed Parallel Worlds" be serialized?

Of course the level is enough.

Xi Muhan has shown strong creative ability in "Ding Shi", and Lu Ning's creative level is even more different than before.

Therefore, there is no reason not to serialize a comic created by two people.

The most fundamental reason why Hook is asking the two to re-adjust the plot is that they have different requirements for the work-the magazine hopes that their new work will become a new pillar, rather than a work that is hovering in the middle.

Xi Muhan and Lu Ning revised it again based on Hook's suggestion. Now that Lu Ning also uses a digital display, it is relatively convenient to modify.

As for the title of the book, the two of them were thinking about it for a long time, but they couldn't think of a suitable name.

After all, it is still difficult to reflect the theme of the story with fewer words.

In Shen Xin's studio, assistants left one after another, and Xi Muhan and Lu Ning also discussed the progress of the comic with Wu Xiaoli. Later, Yan Fei and Wang Wenhong also participated, and the discussion was full of joy.

After turning off the pen screen and computer, Shen Xin yawned. He came out of the office and saw that the five people were still discussing in Lu Ning's studio, so he tapped on the door.

When Lu Ning saw Shen Xin, she immediately stood up, and the four others also consciously gave way.

"What are you doing?"

"Get a name. Group Leader Hook said, "The Girl Who Crossed Parallel Worlds" is too long, it's better to compress it." Wu Xiaoli explained.

"I think this name is pretty good, so I just mentioned the selling point." Shen Xin smiled.

Naming a book is a delicate matter, and the same is true for online novels. It is best to have a selling point. For example, system texts all have "xx system". This is because readers may find this book when searching for the hot word "system". Similarly, there are "XX God of War" and "XX God Emperor". The book "XX of Rebirth" is also for this reason.

However, the names of some comics can be guessed too, such as "mix" and "H2" by Adachi, and "Five Star Stories" by Nagano Mamoru. If you don't read the comics, you will definitely not be able to guess the content of the comics, even the subject matter. It will be hard to think of.

For "The Girl Traversing Parallel World", Shen Xin felt that there was no big problem.

"Really? Then...change it or not?" Xi Muhan hesitated.

"Looking at what Editor Wu said, I'm not very good at this." Shen Xin picked it up, looked at it quickly, and raised his brows slightly.

"Teacher, is there anything wrong?" Lu Ning saw that Shen Xin had some comments on the revised, and asked quickly.

"No... I just think the previous one is quite good. After the modification, it loses its own characteristics." Shen Xin was a little regretful. "The plot after the first episode has some routines."

Wang Wenhong and Yan Fei looked at each other, tacitly.

They also think this way.

"Obviously, the first episode is more suitable for evil comics." Shen Xin added.

"However, creating evil comics...the length will be limited." Xi Muhan entangled.

"Then it depends on your pursuit. If you want to create a high-reputation comic, focus on the first chapter. If you want to draw a long comic, focus on the following plot. But, I think, if you want to focus on Drawing the follow-up story... It doesn't matter whether the heroine crosses or not, right?

"The following plot is related to crossing." Xi Muhan added.

Shen Xin couldn't laugh or cry, "Perhaps, but the readers don't know that there is a relationship between the two. Unless you want to imitate "The Gate of Destiny", you can get in touch with each other. If you want to use crossing as a selling point, I... personally don't like it. "

Many times, creators will set a plot, and this plot has a lot to do with the follow-up, but readers do not buy it and feel that the plot is redundant. This is actually the case.

Because readers don’t know the creator’s outline, they can only see what the creator wants them to see, and the creator cannot spoil it, so both parties are very uncomfortable.

Take this new manga as an example. Judging from the first three chapters, the relationship between the first chapter and the second and third chapters is not too great. This is also a pity that Shen Xin feels the most, because the first chapter has the potential to become a pillar. , May even become the classic of another evil manga.

The first episode of "The Girl Traversing Parallel Worlds" reminds Shen Xin of "another", the atmosphere is very close, the two can draw a decrypted comic, but the decision is in the hands of Xi Muhan, and Shen Xin does not want to think too much. Put pressure on her.

Others also looked at Xi Muhan who was in deep thought, waiting for her decision.

However, how to choose the direction of the story has always been not a simple matter, and sometimes it may even make the performance of the work turn from prosperity to decline.

On this day, Xi Muhan did not give a result. It was not until later the next day that she gathered everyone together and said her own thoughts-to tear down "The Girl Who Traversed Parallel Worlds".

How to dismantle?

This question emerged in everyone's mind.

"It is to separate the first episode and the following plot. From the first episode of the original version, a new comic is extended, focusing on adventure and decryption~lightnovelpub.net~ The content behind is redesigned to love, adventure , Add some mythological or monster elements. But, in this way, I may have to wait for a while, let me reorganize the work. As for the name of the new work, it is still called "The Girl Who Crossed the Parallel World"."

Xi Muhan apologized to Lu Ning and Wu Xiaoli.

Shen Xin nodded. He understood Xi Muhan's idea, that is, to divide this step of the comic into two completely unconnected works.

In this case, Shen Xin is still looking forward to the first story. In Shen Xin's view, it does have the potential to become a pillar and even surpass other comics in ComicFuture. Of course, the premise is to exclude "".

After Hook learned about Xi Muhan's decision, he didn't say a word for a long time.

Unexpectedly, his words postponed the serialization date of a new work by a month.

As the time entered December, the schools that were shortlisted for the national competition were determined one by one. Fang Man also forwarded the information of major colleges and universities to Yan Fei, who was then sorted out by Yan Fei, and then handed over to Shen Xin to draw and design.

At the same time, the full-color version of "" has finally been finalized. After Yu Chen and Shen Xin have negotiated, it is determined that the full-color version is limited to 100,000 copies, and the unit price is set at 100 yuan.

The full-color version is just the icing on the cake, and what "" really sells is the regular version.

Of course, these contents are only discussed privately by Yu Chen and Shen Xin. On major platforms, Yu Chen and the magazine of "ComicFuture" only said one point-the full-color version of "" will be published next year. On sale half a year.

This news is indeed great news for fans of "". Many people talked about the full-color version of the comics on the forum, and they were eager to snap up a copy.

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