My Cartoonist Guide

Chapter 1039: Substitution feeling

After hearing Shen Xin's suggestion, Ji Yinxuan also began to consider the version.

In May of next year, China has a game exhibition, "Stone of Destiny" will definitely be exhibited, and even if magi has won the production rights of "Stone of Destiny", it is a new company after all, and there are very few works that can be obtained. Few, and even less likely to be like some big companies—such as Zhenyu, whose company name is advertising—be familiar to players and become the focus. Therefore, it is likely to be left out in the early stage.

Fortunately, the novels and comics of "Stone of Destiny" have been advertised, and this game has accumulated a certain amount of popularity, which is considered an advantage. Versions in other languages ​​are trying to expand the sales of the game. However, games like "Stones of Destiny" have relatively large texts, and the cost of translation will not be too low, and it is more time-consuming.

But if it can really increase sales, such a price is obviously worth it.

However, before that, Magi still has to finish the game of "Stone of Destiny".

Xi Muhan has also been very busy in the past month. After she decided to take apart a comic, she was not idle.

At the beginning of the creation of a work, there must be a concept, otherwise, it is like water without a source or a tree without a root. When the author creates, he feels that there is no focus, and readers will feel scattered when reading it.

If it is a daily work, the story structure is not tight, and the problem will not be too big, but for an evil manga, the loose story is simply a taboo-in order to compete with other kingly comics, evil manga must always attract readers.

After Xi Muhan decided to extend the plot of the new work based on the first chapter, he really put a lot of effort into writing a good script.

When it comes to evil comics, a comic that cannot be avoided is "DN", but Shen Xin did not let her read it, nor did she let her as a reference, so as not to mess her mind, just let her watch some movies or documentaries, and watch some at most. Suspense novel.

In fact, whether "DN", "As God Says", or "The Promised Neverland" with evil comics, this kind of comics is obviously different from detective comics or novels. .

For example, "Jin Tian Yi Juvenile Incident Book", its difficulty lies in how to design the modus operandi, how to create new ideas if the "secret room murder" is to be used, and how to establish the murderer's alibi? These are all creations. It’s important to consider.

In other words, the author is "designing" the story, and the most typical case is the "hexagon village incident". The technique at the time was very clever.

Going back to the common evil comics, there are also design bridges, but the difference from the detective comics is that the rules and the bridges will be told in advance to readers. For example, "DN", readers know the existence of DN from the first chapter; another example is "Gambling Apocalypse", various game rules, such as "rock, scissors, cloth", such as E card game, the rules will be told to readers in advance Therefore, the focus of the comics is not to design bridges, but to "fight" and fight against rules, but it is more about "wisdom fighting" with different people, and more emphasis on logic.

Of course, this situation is not 100%. Like "The Gate of Destiny Stones", the result of the event tells you-Mayuri's death-and then the protagonist will work with the reader to unravel the entire mystery.

Going back to "The Girl Who Crossed Parallel Worlds", the best way is to break down the mystery of the whole story, similar to "The Gate of Destiny Stones", but unlike "The Gate of Destiny Stones", the biggest advantage of "The Girl Crossing Parallel Worlds" is to enter the topic It is faster and easier to attract readers. The disadvantage of this is that it is because of the quick entry of the topic that the story is not enough. Therefore, Xi Muhan will add this type of setting in the subsequent plot.

In addition, according to Shen Xin, there is one biggest difference between "The Gate of Destiny Stones" and "Passing Through Girl". Rentaro Okabe can traverse repeatedly to correct the real world line. There is also "The Gate of Destiny". re: "Zero-Starting Life in Another World", "Happy Death Day" and other works, also promote events through multiple crossings/backs, but "Crossing Girl" does not have so many crossings.

To advance the plot, the story must have contradictions, but how to create contradictions under the premise that it cannot be traversed repeatedly has become a highlight, and this is where Shen Xin pays the most attention.

After washing, the two were about to rest. Before turning off the lights, Shen Xin also raised the issue.

Xi Muhan used a hair dryer to dry his hair, turned around and looked at Shen Xin, with a smug expression on his face, "Of course there is a contradiction. Brother, do you know the butterfly effect?"

"Yeah." Shen Xin nodded.

The so-called butterfly effect is that a small event may cause a huge chain reaction.

"After the heroine passed through, it actually had an impact on the parallel world. Coupled with the death of classmate Wang He, a series of events related to Wang He will change. This conflicts with the heroine’s memory. This conflict points to the death of Wang He, thereby advancing the plot."

"The difference between the two worlds?" Shen Xin stunned ~lightnovelpub.net~ This is a good starting point. "But there is a sense of substitution. Readers don't know what Wang He's departure will bring to this world. Variety."

"I think so, the heroine travels for a week or two. Then, through these two weeks, the difference between Wang He's existence and contradiction is found. The heroine finds the cause of Wang He's death on the one hand, and on the other hand Find a way to travel to the world before.” Xi Muhan obviously also considered this issue.

Shen Xin rubbed his chin, frowning, "This way the rhythm will be slow, and the sense of substitution may be poor."

"Ok?"

"Did you not find out? The structure of your story is actually similar to "Stone Gate of Destiny", and you have to use the previous plot to replace it. The difference is that "Crossing Girl" enters the title faster than "Stone Gate", "Stone Gate" "Because of the preparation, the story will only usher in a turning point when the plot is halfway through, and because there is a lot of foreshadowing in the front, readers will have a sense of substitution when they see the follow-up plot. And "Crossing Girl" is due to the entrance The question is too fast, and the reader does not know what happened in the past one or two weeks. When you bring up a contradiction, the reader will be at a loss." Shen Xin said with some worry.

Xi Muhan frowned, recalled the whole plot in his mind, and realized that if he really wants to advance like this, there will indeed be a sense of substitution.

Don't let readers resonate, and the impact on readers will be greatly reduced.

"Then what to do?" Xi Muhan scratched his head, suddenly feeling a little irritable in his heart.

If her goal is to serialize, her current brains should be enough, but her goal is obviously more than that.

Shen Xin sighed. If he wanted to find a solution in a short time, it seemed...not too easy.

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