My Cartoonist Guide

Chapter 394: The flaws of the plot

The autumn breeze gradually lifted and the climate turned cooler.

In a blink of an eye it entered November.

In November, the second volume of "comicfuture" was released, and its weekly sales exceeded 500,000 copies again.

This volume begins in Chapter 7. After the synthesis of the beast, Ska confronted Elric brothers, Roy and Armstrong, the "powerful alchemist", and was eventually unbeaten and defeated.

Edward's right arm was destroyed, and the armor with Al's soul was severely damaged.

Because only Edward knew how to attach Al to his armor, Edward had to repair his right arm before he could restore Al's armor. Therefore, he can only go to his outfitter Wen Li, the childhood sweetheart of the Elric brothers.

However, in this volume, Skar’s identity is also revealed-Ishvar was once conquered and annexed by Amesdoris (the country where the protagonist is located). Skar was the Iraqi who survived that war 13 years ago. Xiuval.

In this war, the national alchemist acted as the executioner, and Roy and Armstrong both participated in the war.

Therefore, Skar's hatred of the national alchemist can be explained.

If the first volume is just the beginning of normal, then the second volume has opened the tip of the iceberg.

In the war thirteen years ago, because of the participation of the national alchemist, Amestolis won the victory without any suspense. But this also brings a series of questions. What is the truth of that war? Is it related to the Edward Brothers? That war was just a background introduction for Skar, or did it play a pivotal role in "Steel Refining"?

In addition, Edward also got clues about the refinement of the "Sage's Stone", and related materials were placed in the first branch of the Central Library. This also made Edward decide to go to the first branch after the arm was healed.

The second volume is full of suspense, and readers are also full of expectations for the plot of "Steel Refining".

The serialization progress on "comicfuture" is faster than the one-page book.

In the two episodes of "Home with Families Waiting" (upper and lower), the comic explains for the first time the reason why Edward lost his right arm-he exchanged his right arm for Al's soul.

And Wen Li finally completed Edward's mechanical armor after three nights, but because she was too tired, she forgot a screw.

"There is a foreshadowing here!"

Some readers immediately made an assertion after seeing this scene.

"Nonsense, do you still need to talk about it? The structure of "Steel Refining" is very compact. Using this paragraph to deliberately talk about a screw will definitely be foreshadowing.

As soon as the question was raised, it was refuted by other readers, while more readers had no intention of refuting it at all.

Who can't see such a simple foreshadowing?

However, most readers are very interested in another question-what is hidden in the research materials of "Sage's Stone"?

In the expectation of readers, the 45th issue of "comicfuture" is on sale.

Readers who bought the magazine turned to "Steel Refining" for the first time, glanced at the title of this sentence, and were delighted.

"It really is the'Sage's Stone'! What is hidden in the'Sage's Stone'?"

With doubts, the reader eagerly opened the magazine.

When Edward arrived at the first branch of the library, he found that the first branch was in ruins. Just a few days ago, a fire destroyed all the books. Fortunately, someone recommended a wizard who was addicted to books and remembered. Staying with the books I have read-it is precisely because I was too fascinated to read and was fired.

Relying on her super memory, she silently wrote the information of the Sage's Stone that Edward needed.

Relying on these materials, Edward finally unlocked the secret of the'Sage's Stone'. "

"Ahhh... the'Sage's Stone' was made from a living person."

"The doctor said to Edward,'If you know it, you will see hell.' If it is made from a living person, it would be really horrible."

"Seeing this, my mood suddenly became heavy again. In the end, choose the sage's stone or choose life-so entangled."

"Steelmaking, it feels so heavy."

"So, quickly change the topic. I don't understand alchemy. Why does the doctor write the research materials into a recipe? Is it a mystery?"

"That's not enough. As far as I know, this seems to be the habit of alchemists. Medieval alchemists like to hide their research and use words to hide it from others. Therefore, you must have professionals. Interpretation works."

"It turns out that this is the case, the setting of "Steel Refining" is really elegant."

"By the way, there is a plot that is too silly x! Doctor Mar is afraid that others will know the truth about the Sage's Stone, so he hides it with a recipe, but Edward directly told the two guards, which is really trivial. Is Edward mentally retarded!?"

"That's right, Edward behaves too much like a child. He has searched for this secret for several years, but only tells others casually. Teacher Shen is inconsiderate."

"What's wrong? When Mr. Shen painted this section, he absolutely didn't use his brain!"

"Snapped!"

During the break, Gao Hang went to Manjia.com and glanced at readers' posts.

When he saw the latest message, he patted the table angrily. Shen Xin, who had just arrived on the first floor to get coffee, and the other two assistants looked at Gao Hang in surprise.

"What's the matter?" Shen Xin asked puzzledly.

"They said that Edward told the two guards directly, it was too mentally retarded. Moreover, they said that you didn't use your brain to draw this plot... Teacher Shen, don't be angry, this is not what I said, it was them..." Gao Hang said. Speaking out, quickly changed his words, pointed to the computer screen and said.

Shen Xin couldn't laugh or cry.

However, there is one thing that these readers are really right. When he was drawing, he did not worry about the plot of the story. After all, Aunt Niu had already described the story perfectly. But if Aunt Niu did not seriously consider this scene when she painted this scene, this is not accurate.

At first, when Shen Xin saw this scene, he also had an idea with the video barrage. This kind of plot is too rigorous, but if you put this plot in the whole story, it is not difficult to understand.

"This...actually ~lightnovelpub.net~ This arrangement makes sense." Shen Xin explained.

Liu Rui and Hang Jian raised their heads and looked at Shen Xin curiously.

Shen Xin scratched his head, because the two of them were mainly assistants and had no idea of ​​creating comics separately, so Shen Xin didn't teach them too much.

Just talk a little bit this day, right?

"Actually, you should also be able to see it. These two guards know that it will lead to subsequent plots, such as the Fifth Research Institute. If the two of them do not know the news, they will not notify Armstrong. Then, Armstrong will not Information about the Fifth Research Institute will be provided."

Since the 18th and 19th chapters have been drawn, the three assistants can understand Shen Xin's words.

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