Xi Muhan wanted to cooperate with Su Han, but he was unable to do so for the time being.

Su Han hopes to participate. After all, "Steelmaking" has already begun to take off in China, and it is also very popular in the 11 districts. In addition, Chuangji Uno is also well-known in the industry. At the same time, Shen Xinhe Xi Muhan will also participate. All kinds of factors made Su Han feel that it would be a good experience if he had the opportunity to script this comic.

However, she is now advertising for the new book, and it will take half a month no matter what.

In other words, she could not return to Hongchuan within this half month.

Su Han temporarily joined Hopeless, and Shen Xin and Xi Muhan did not feel discouraged. In fact, the reason why Xi Muhan wanted to ask Su Han for help was mainly in the creation of novels and scripts.

The same detailed outline, if given to different authors, the novels written will definitely be different.

This difference is not only reflected in the choice of words and sentences, but also in the control of the rhythm of the story.

Xi Muhan used to write ancient styles, with exquisite writing, and emphasized that the emotions emanated from the inside out. Before he knew it, the emotions of the characters had already blended.

But Su Han is good at reasoning and emphasizes the suspense of the story. Sometimes, in order to achieve unexpected results, he does not even emphasize the logic too much. This leads to the fact that the rhythm of Su Han's novels is faster than that of Xi Muhan.

Especially, in recent times, Su Han has also tried to change her style, wanting to make her writing style more diversified. In fact, her latest love novel is much better than before.

At the same time, in terms of creative experience, Su Han is more abundant than Xi Muhan, and the problem is not too big to deal with.

Since it was still early in September, Shen Xin was not in a hurry, but Xi Muhan took advantage of this time to continue to revise the outline, striving to complete the complete outline before Su Han came.

This time, Xi Muhan also began to try to determine the big rhythm of the story according to the length of the single episode. For example, the first episode introduces the background, the second episode paves the way, and the third episode is a turning point...

Mark the key points of each episode, put appropriate content into it, redistribute the plot, and delete redundant details.

The original detailed outline of 11 episodes has been reduced by one episode.

At the same time, Shen Xin also put forward his own opinion. Although the work is a double protagonist, unlike "Steel Refining", Zhang Mei and Yao Lin have relatively independent story lines, so when creating, they can only focus on one character. .

“It’s best to start with Zhang Mei. Zhang Mei can be used to introduce alchemy. However, the whole story is best to focus on Yao Lin. After all, Yao Lin also has Fu Ye and Lan Fang, and the difficulty of creation is slightly lower. There won’t be nothing to say."

Xi Muhan nodded.

There must be more things happening between the three people than one person, not to mention that Yao Lin, as the prince, is also closer to the emperor.

Xi Muhan has already thought about these things.

"By the way, there are some details, you also need to know, such as Xiaomei-that is the small panda, sometimes synchronized with Zhang Mei's movements."

"Yeah." Xi Muhan carefully wrote down on the notepad.

"Also, Lan Fang can smell the scent of artificial people."

"Huh?" Xi Muhan was taken aback, and looked up at Shen Xin, "Is she a ‘dog’?"

"..."

"Steel Refining" was published again after two weeks of suspension, and "The Eye of the King" was finally published.

Before this statement, Edward had to go to Central City due to the qualification examination of the national alchemist.

After meeting with Bradley (President), Edward accidentally mentioned his master Izmi.

Bradley wanted to invite Izmi to be the national alchemist, so he went to Dabris. At the same time, Al was captured by Glid. Izmi kicked Gli to rescue Al. De's door.

Izmi initially wanted to save Al back, but Al stopped her.

"Please let my brother come...Glid taught us the method of artificial humans, and my brother taught him the method of soul-making. This opportunity is rare..."

At Al's strong request, Izmi had to return home first.

Edward led Bradley to reach Bliss. During the conversation, Bradley accidentally learned about Glid.

On the one hand, Edhua rescued Al and started a fight with Glid, while Bradley mobilized the army and besieged Glid.

"The King's Eye" is talking about the duel between Grider and Bradley.

On the last page, Bradley's long sword pierced Glid's throat, and at the same time his blindfold fell off, and the tattoo of a body-chewing snake appeared in his pupils.

This scene surprised the readers.

"Bradley is not human!"

"He is the most powerful person in this country... I didn't expect him to be a man."

"I want to know now, will Edward and they fight Bradley?"

"Can't beat it? Bradley's swordsmanship is super strong, Edward's physical skills, it is impossible to beat Bradley."

"I look forward to the next plot... I can't guess it."

This remark caused a good response among the readers. "Steel Refining" was also in the small book, defeating "The Legend of the Dragon King" and came to the third position.

Shang Haozhi is quite satisfied with the performance of "Steel Refining", and he has also seen the name of the following nearly 20 episodes, and it is easier to control the trend of the entire comic. From the content he has read, the settings and The layout has already exceeded the average level of "The Legend of the Dragon King". What is slightly lacking is fighting.

Even though there are some fighting scenes in the book, it is still slightly less enthusiastic for a kingly way, and even the top work of the magazine.

However, the flaws are not concealed. Even so, he still feels that "Steel Refining" has the potential to become the new pillar of "ComicFuture"-replacing the "Dragon King" ~lightnovelpub.net~ due to the addition of "The King of Rock" and " The revival of "Steel Refining" has finally stopped the sales of "ComicFuture" from falling.

At the same time, the online version of the comics has made good profits, although it is far from the "ComicFuture", even 50 comics in a week's sales. Not as much as one-tenth of "ComicFuture", but for old cartoonists, this is another income-especially for those cartoonists who are already in financial difficulties.

"By the way, how is Mr. Shen recently?" Shang Haozhi looked up and asked Shen Xin after reading the report sent by the sales department.

"The creation of "Steel Refining" is normal, but Mr. Shen put some energy on the script." Wang Wenhong said.

Shang Haozhi frowned, "Please pay attention to his body...what did Teacher Su say?"

"She is still in Yanjing, and there are several bookstores to sign and sell books, and it will take five or six days at the earliest. She has signed contracts with these bookstores, so there is no way."

"Yeah." Shang Haozhi nodded slightly and let out a sigh of patience.

Su Han is quite well-known in the bestseller world, and he can't force the other party, he can only hope that Su Han will return to Hongchuan soon.