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Time entered August. ~ Sui~ Dream~ Little~ Say~щ~ sui

After the words "The Fool's Struggle", the direction of the story exceeded many readers' expectations.

Gried completely occupied Yao Lin's body, the situation was one-sided, and the Elric brothers were also subdued by Enwei and Gratoni. At this critical juncture, Scar and Zhang Mei entered the basement in search of the red panda, Xiaomei, and saw the robot and the Elric brothers.

The cyborgs fought fierce battles with Ska and Xiaomei. The Elric brothers took advantage of the chaos to regain their freedom. At the same time, Edward also discovered one thing-Xiaomei and Ska could use "alchemy".

Taking advantage of the chaos, Edward also told Skar the truth of "Ishvar's Rebellion", that is, Enweihua turned into an officer and shot the little girl.

The war is about to start, but the Elric brothers and others are not the opponents of the cyborgs. Zhang Mei and Xiaomei hid in Al’s armor, but after the two brothers were captured, they were sent to the headquarters to be honest with Bradley. Boogong had a conversation, and Skar, who had escaped from the sewer, accidentally ran into Dr. Margo who was locked up by a robot...

With each change of "Steel Refining", the plot will progress to varying degrees. As evaluated on the Internet, this comic has almost no waste plot.

Unconsciously, the chapter of "Steel Refining" finally involves one of the two greatest tragedies-"Ishwar Rebellion".

This war is a war of unequal power. Let alone Amesdoris's powerful firepower, the national alchemist he possesses completely tilted the balance of this war.

Familiar faces appeared one after another.

Hughes, Lisa, Roy, Armstrong, and in the second half of the comic, the "Red Lotus Alchemist" Kimberly...

At the same time, Wen Li's parents, the Rockbells who have been helping the Ishval people, also appeared in the picture.

In the last two weeks of August, "Steel Refining" officially described the war, and the originally stretched plot became tense again. At the same time, the cruelty of the war was also **** on the paper.

This is a war of annihilation, and Amesdoris massacred the Ishvar people, which was almost annihilated.

The discussion on the "Ishwar Rebellion" on the Internet has not stopped since the "footsteps of annihilation". This dark line that has been implemented in the early stage and in the comics has been clarified.

Since this episode is a memory, readers already know the outcome of the matter in advance. Therefore, when seeing this plot, many people can't bear to read it, otherwise, the feeling of depression will come to mind when reading this plot.

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The little book of "Future" is still in the ranking of the hot list. "Steel Refining" has a trend of whereabouts, being surpassed by "The King of Rock" and "Age of Gods" respectively.

However, cartoonists and readers who have seen this plot have a different mood.

Tragedy is to destroy the valuable things in life for others to see.

The more tragedy, the more heartbroken, the more memorable it is, and at the same time, it also deepens the depth and connotation of the story.

Here is a double-edged sword, with both good and bad sides.

Shen Xin was also prepared for the decline in rankings.

Just like the disappearance of Zuo Wei, although the ranking of "Hairki" almost collapsed, looking back now, if Zuowei does not disappear, "Hairki" will probably not make people so memorable.

Of course, although the "Ishwar Rebellion" is a tragedy, its impact on the work is far less than the disappearance of Zuowei. The reasons are different and the sense of substitution is different.

Zuowei is equivalent to the second actor in "The Soul of the Game", but Ishuba’s civil strife is different. There are only a handful of people named, and, apart from Skar, there are not many dead people. Readers The feelings devoted to these roles are naturally not as good as Zuowei.

Just seeing such a plot, the inner depression is inevitable.

Shen Xin didn't care about this. After this episode of the story passed, the ranking of "Steel Refining" naturally went up.

Unknowingly, in the evening, the aunt returned home after making a supper, while Xi Muhan led Lu Ning to the studio.

Just on the second floor, Xi Muhan couldn't wait to say, "Brother Xin, Sister Yan said that the book "Ding Shi" won the 7th place."

"Really? That's amazing!" Shen Xin nodded slightly when he saw Lu Ning behind Xi Muhan, "Mr. Lu, in the "ic

"Future" serialization, how do you feel? "

Lu Ning smiled bitterly, "Master, you said that, didn't you specifically knock me down?"

In the business of comics, assistants are basically equivalent to the apprentices of cartoonists.

"You suddenly called me Master, I feel so old." Shen Xin waved his hand, thinking he was young.

Lu Ning rolled her eyes, she was not in charge of this kind of thing.

Having said that, what Shen Xin said is right, after all, he is really too young.

"Then call the teacher first?" ic

Future"...I can only say that the pressure is so great. "Lu Ning sighed, "When I was in "Girls' Century", I always felt relaxed and could get the first place.

"Future", the top one is the 5th in the first episode, the 6th in the previous episode, and the 7th in this episode. Every word feels backwards. "

"This is normal." Shen Xin comforted, ""The Soul of Chess" was originally published in "ic

"Future" is serialized, and the results are also unstable, but at this time, the mentality must be controlled. As I said before, because it is a serialization, the mindset of the creator must fluctuate with readers' feedback. As for the plot of the story, you should also make timely adjustments. "

"Ah? How to adjust? No...you don't mean ~lightnovelpub.net~ to stick to your own opinions?"

"There are two situations. One is that readers' opinions should not be affected too much, but avoid the poisoning point; second, the ranking of small books is very important, and sometimes even more important than the sales of single books. After 16 people, be prepared to cut it down at any time. Therefore, when drawing na, you must communicate with Sister Yan, but don’t draw too long na, two or three words at most, so that you can change it at any time...Xiao Han , You have no experience, these are actually told to you. Don't take it for granted, you must discuss with Sister Yan more."

"Huh?" Xi Muhan was taken aback, then nodded, "I see!"

"Also, there must be an overall plan. For a certain period of time, we must come up with different new ideas. The background of "Ding Shi" is now, including molecular cuisine, the world’s three major cuisines, and some small local specialties. Don’t have too little vision."

Lu Ning and Xiao Han's eyes lit up. Both of them focused on the domestic dishes, and they had indeed forgotten the foreign dishes.

"Another point is that the construction of the worldview must be well prepared, otherwise the sudden introduction of foreign dishes or characters will make the comics feel a sense of tearing."

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