? This kind of feeling is that I haven't mentioned it much before, and then suddenly appeared, which made the reader feel strange.

The strongest sense of fragmentation is actually changing the map. When creating, don't be too obsessed with one place or one aspect in the early stage, and don't give readers a sense of closure.

In terms of the type of food, in this respect, the "Spirit of the Halberd" was handled very well in the early stage, such as molecular cuisine, Chinese cuisine and French cuisine. Especially in the first-year autumn competition, a large amount of food made People's eyes lit up.

But the problem that followed was that a large number of innovative dishes were produced at a time, which made it difficult for the subsequent dishes to be amazing.

As for "the-blue", the chefs are using chainsaws or small guillotines to cook...Well, Shen Xin doesn't know how to cook, so he doesn't comment on this.

But what Shen Xin wants to say is that no matter the type of dishes is weak or the setting is self-contradictory, it can't compare with another point, the sense of fragmentation caused by the map.

In the middle and early stages of "Spirit of Eater Halberd", the map of the comics was mainly in Yuanyue Academy, or nearby places. As the story develops, Yuanyue Academy and the plot are gradually not matched, and new ones need to be introduced. "map".

Originally, "The Ghost Father Chapter" was a good opportunity to bring the world beyond Yuanyue Academy into the reader's field of vision, but for unknown reasons, Futian Yuto gave up this practice, causing the following plot to be the same as the previous one. The plot, there is a problem in the connection.

The tearing caused by the "map", or the impact of the protagonist entering different "maps", is actually a very serious problem. Including web content, there will be things that cause the results to collapse due to the replacement of the map.

Compared with practitioners, the number of authors who can solve this problem is really too small.

Take the cities of online texts as an example. The biggest change of maps is to switch from cities to cultivation, but most of them collapsed here. Anyone who has passed this hurdle is almost like a leader in the city.

Shen Xin's words gave Xi Muhan a certain idea. She nodded slightly and said softly: "If you want to join foreign cuisine, you really need to prepare well."

"Not only are there dishes from other countries, but also foreign players-yes, if there are foreigners, language... how do you deal with it? After all, the language doesn't work." Shen Xin curiously asked.

"what?"

Xi Muhan blinked. Originally, he didn't consider foreign cuisine. He did not have to worry about language differences, but now he must seriously consider it.

"Remember, for a role that only plays once, you can make the other party not understand Chinese. If you are a resident character, you must be able to speak Chinese fluently!"

"Huh? Can speak Chinese? Readers must be in a drama!" Xi Muhan said in surprise, "They will complain about the setting, right?"

"It is true. The creation of the work should take into account the rationality, but the rationality also serves the plot. If the characters do not speak Chinese, every time they say a sentence and then be translated by others, the fluency of the story will be greatly reduced. Therefore, in 11 District, even foreigners in the comics can speak fluent Japanese. When you create, you can just add a reason, explain the reason, and don’t follow the logic too much.” Shen Xin explained.

This one will definitely be regarded as a wise setting by the Reasonable Party, but everyone is in a different position. They only see this, but they don't see why.

If according to their suggestion, give the character a translation, revise the name and manuscript, they will say again, who is going to be a chef/competition/school abroad, and a translator should stand beside him?

If a setting has 10% disadvantages and 90% advantages, then the author must use this setting.

It's not that the author doesn't know the disadvantages of this setting or plot, but that the impact on the whole work and the difficulty of creation must be considered comprehensively.

Lu Ning has been following comics for a long time and knows some routines, but sometimes just speculation, like today, Shen Xin directly said it, it is really rare.

But the content of these words is more important to Xi Muhan. She is the original work and needs to consider the layout of the plot. Therefore, we have to face these problems directly.

"By the way, Sister Yan doesn't seem to be here much recently..."

"Well, sister Yan has been busy recently. Because of Zuo Yuan's affairs."

"Speaking of Zuo Yuan, how is he doing now?" Shen Xin suddenly remembered Zuo Yuan. After Duoman made the announcement, he didn't pay much attention to Zuo Yuan—he had a lot of things.

"After "Minecraft" was unsealed, two more episodes were updated, which is over. He is now an assistant to a cartoonist, and by the way, he draws the name of the new cartoon. I heard that he will also create short stories. After getting approval To be serialized."

"Normal. After all, he hasn't broken out in "ComicFuture". Although "Minecraft" is showing signs of gaining momentum, but before it has time to raise its head, it was pinched out. In fact, Sister Yan did this for a success. I guess that he has been drawing names in the past few months. Of course, after a lot of practice and modification, the next comic should improve."

The popularity of a work requires the strength, luck and noble person of the author. I don't know what kind of popularity Zuo Yuan's new work will have.

"There is still one thing, Sister Yan just mentioned...but it doesn't have much to do with us." Xi Muhan looked up and thought back.

It doesn't matter...then why are you mentioning this?

Shen Xin couldn't laugh or cry, but still subconsciously asked, "What's the matter?"

"There seems to be a Chinese comic in District 11, which is a bit popular."

"In District 11, there are several popular Chinese comics. Isn't it a common occurrence?"

"However, that comic is not well-known in China."

"What?" Shen Xin was a little surprised.

According to common sense, it is quite difficult for Huaxia's works to be famous in District 11, just like on the earth, it is also difficult for Qingzhou in District 11 to enter the Huaxia market. The light that readers can see, whether it is an official publication or a self-translation by a fan, has actually been screened in District 11.

If he didn't break out in the domestic market, but had a small reputation in District 11, Shen Xin would be surprised.

"What is the title of the book?"

"I don't know..." Xi Muhan scratched his head, a little embarrassed, "Sister Yan only said it once, it seems to be related to dancing or fighting dance."

What is the difference between this and not saying?

"It should be Dance Dancer~lightnovelpub.net~ is indeed Dou Wu."

Fighting dance means that several people are divided into two groups, taking turns in the center of the stage, doing BREAKING action. At the beginning, the sports channel promoted this kind of sport.

Shen Xin didn't understand Dou Wu, but she seemed to think it was very high.

"Dou Wu? It sounds interesting, too. However, the name is familiar." Shen Xin had some impressions, but he couldn't remember it.

"Teacher, Zuo Yuan had an accident not long ago and was swiped by someone to replace the work of "Minecraft," which is "Random Dancer"." Lu Ning reminded.

"It turned out to be that work..." Shen Xin nodded slightly and suddenly became interested in this comic.

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