Wang Wenhong raised his brows slightly. From his point of view, this comic is still ok, and if this comic passes, there is no problem.

　　 Yan Fei directly denied... Is the requirement too strict?

　　Wang Wenhong glanced at Zuo Yuan, his expression also showed surprise. After his face changed slightly, he took a deep breath, "Mr. Yan, there are any shortcomings in this name, please tell me."

　　"The story is very flat, and it is mainly advanced by the small things that happened in the school. It means that you should have carefully considered the things in the school. However, there is one thing, a good comic must have bright spots or selling points.

　　 "The light style of this comic is also a selling point, but you have to be clear that more than one comic in China has this style. If you jump out of the three major magazines, there should be a lot of comics of this style."

　　 "Yes, it is not impossible for you to choose this kind of comics, but I always feel that you are not prepared." Wang Wenhong also interjected.

　　 Yan Fei turned her head, staring at Wang Wenhong with cold eyes.

　　 Wang Wenhong knew Yan Fei was dissatisfied, immediately raised his hands, turned around helplessly, and prepared to leave.

　　 "Wait... This teacher, I want to ask, why do you say that?" Zuo Yuan quickly stood up and stopped Wang Wenhong.

　　 "On the main line." Wang Wenhong reminded, "She is your editor, let her speak."

　　 Zuo Yuan looked at Yan Fei suspiciously.

　　 Yan Fei held her cheeks unhappily, and after a little thought, she explained: "What he meant is that this comic has no main line."

　　 "Huh?" Zuo Yuan was taken aback, and then quickly said, "Even if there is no main line, I can draw well..."

"He didn't mean that. Comics without a main line are actually very difficult to create. Long comics, and even longer novels, will have a main line! The main line is actually very obvious, just to give readers expectations, by the way Readers, the following plot will be very exciting, let readers read along with the comics.

"However, the daily comics do not have a main line. They basically consist of one story, and each story is relatively independent. Even if you miss a certain period or even a few of them, you still don’t feel that you are missing anything when you continue to read the comics. This is the first feature of everyday comics.

　　 "The second feature lies in the creation. The problem he mentioned just now lies in this. The creation of daily comics is very difficult."

　　 Seeing the puzzlement on Zuo Yuan's face, Yan Fei sighed.

　　 Zuo Yuan still has too little experience in long-length serialization.

"For a long-form serialized comic to attract people, it must have a wonderful plot, so that readers can feel the joys, sorrows, sorrows and joys of the comic characters, that is, it can arouse readers' emotions. However, the daily-oriented comics have a light plot and are mobilizing. Emotionally, it’s not dominant. If you want to get a good grade, you have to spend a lot of thought on the name.

　　 Zuoyuan looked at the name placed on the desktop, feeling a little frustrated.

　　 I thought it was my proud work, but I didn't expect it to be full of loopholes.

　　 Yan Fei saw Zuo Yuan's lost look, and knew that the beating was almost done, so she coughed slightly, "However, it is not without a chance to remedy it."

　　 "Is there...Is there?" Zuo Yuan looked at Yan Fei in surprise.

"How could it not be? Any kind of comics has the potential to be a big hit. Is Go a niche? Isn't there still a comic with excellent performance like "Hairki"? Everyday direction can be regarded as a common theme, and the creation is far more difficult than "Hooki" "Small. If there is no main line to attract the audience, then you can use other methods. This is what I call the "selling point of comics". The story can happen in a strange place, the protagonist can be different, maybe superman, or even It may not be human.

"Secondly, there is more than one way to mobilize emotions. You can use warmth to make the reader feel at ease, or humorous and funny. When readers see such a plot, they can laugh. Use a 20-page or 40-page story, To attract readers.

　　 "Any subject matter can attract readers, but you must use your heart to find the highlights of the story." Yan Fei said seriously.

　　 Sahara suddenly opened up, and his gaze fell on the table again.

"By the way, I will remind you again that you must submit the completed manuscript of name next week. Next, in two weeks, draw more than 30 pages of manuscript. Otherwise, you will not be able to catch up with the New Year Cup. If you can, You see if you can temporarily let go of work in the bookstore, otherwise the time will be too late." Yan Fei reminded.

　　 "I will, thank you very much." Zuo Yuan took a deep breath, his face finally turned ruddy.

　　 After Yan Fei's guidance, Zuo Yuan's thinking became clear.

After 　　 sent Zuo Yuan away, Yan Fei turned around and returned to the editorial department. Xu Jie looked at Yan Fei in surprise, "Xiaoyan, what did you say to him, he seems to be very happy."

　　 "Of course it is a word of encouragement. Also, let him know why this work is not good." Yan Fei explained.

　　 "I told him the same way before, why haven't I seen him so happy?" Xu Jie asked in confusion.

　　 "Then you tell him how to solve the problem?" Yan Fei asked back.

　　 "I must have said..."

　　 "That's because your analysis is not thorough enough!"

　　 "……"

　　 Xu Jie regrets a little bit, so what can I explain to her? She was justified anyway.

　　 At this moment, a landline bell suddenly came from the editorial department.

　　 The people in the editorial department looked to the left and right, Shang Haozhi sighed and muttered to himself, "It is those product companies that are asking about "Steel Refining" again..."

　　 The editors have some sympathy for Shang Haozhi~lightnovelpub.net~Hey..."

　　 "Come up here."

　　The speaker is Bao Jiyi.

　　 Shang Haozhi was taken aback, "Oh, I see."

　　 The others are at a loss, it doesn't look like that.

　　 Shang Haozhi also didn't quite understand what Bao Jiyi meant, so he left the editorial department full of doubts and came to Bao Jiyi's office.

　　 After pushing the door open, he glanced at the room. Bao Jiyi was sitting on the sofa on one side. Opposite him was Long Tian, ​​the general manager of Long Yao Animation.

　　 Why is Longtian here?

　　 Shang Haozhi was confused, turned to close the door, walked quickly to Bao Jiyi's side, nodded to Long Tian, ​​greeted him, and looked at Bao Jiyi inexplicably, "Bao Dong, what's the matter?"

　　 "Sit down and say." Bao Jiyi pointed to the couch on one side, and after Shang Haozhi sat down, he trimmed his hair again, "How about the recent sales of "Steel Refining"?"

　　 "It's okay, 600,000 copies have been sold, and there is one week left this month. When the 14th volume of "Steel Refining" is on sale in November, it is estimated that the total monthly sales of "Steel Refining" should exceed 1.5 million copies."

　　 "Sure enough, works like "Steel Refining", as long as they launch animations, they will surely catch fire!" Long Tian said.

"what?"

　　 The level of "Steel Refining" animation can't be made by any company, right?

　　 Shang Haozhi said suspiciously.