First, Shen Xin can't cook; second, he doesn't read many cartoons.

Therefore, he has not studied gourmet cuisine much.

However, food comics have to burst clothes, pure nonsense, "Late Night Canteen" does not burst clothes, "Dungeon on the Tip of the Tongue" ("Labyrinth Rice") also does not burst clothes, and the quality of the two comics are very good.

Although these two cartoons are also talking about food, they have their own focuses, but in comparison, they are not as pure as "Little Head" and "Spirit of the Halberd".

"Like gourmet comics, the plot should be clearer and clearer. Simply put, it is to introduce food. Normally, in order to express the delicious food and attract readers' attention, competitions between different chefs are indispensable."

"There are also competitions in "Ding Shi"," Xi Muhan nodded and said.

"That's okay. There is a power system...no, is it an upgrade system?" Shen Xin asked.

"What? No, Brother Xin, this is a gourmet comic, how can there be an upgrade system? The characters in "Steel Refining" have not been upgraded from beginning to end, right?"

"Why haven't I been promoted?" Shen Xin retorted, "It's just that the upgrade of the protagonist is not the same as the usual comics. The upgrade in "Steel Refining" is the growth of the protagonist. At first, Edward naively thought that a human body could be used. Refining, resurrecting the mother, but ended in failure. I have seen the customs of other cities, and I have seen Nina's helplessness as a synthetic beast queen. Along the way, Edward has gradually become mature. To some extent, this It's also an upgrade."

Human growth is the most difficult to portray. Many protagonists in online novels are decisive, but they rarely talk about their mental changes.

"Back in "Ding Shi", whether the protagonist's title changed, whether he was junior, intermediate, advanced, or special. This is an upgrade, and the level of the protagonist's restaurant is also an upgrade."

Shen Xin's conversation caused Xi Muhan or Lu Ning Maosai to start, nodding his head repeatedly, agreeing with Shen Xin's words.

They also know the junior, middle, high, and special grades of chefs, but they just think that these are professional titles, and they didn't associate them with upgrades. In addition, Shen Xin's mention of upgrading the restaurant also made them shine.

The highest level pursued by the catering industry is a three-star restaurant, which is the highest pursuit of all practitioners.

In fact, works such as comics and novels are all of the same nature. As long as the upgrade system or power system is well structured, then you can add appropriate plots to the system as needed.

Shen Xin put forward two clues at once, and the story frame was immediately enriched.

"There is still something to remind you."

Lu Ning and Xi Muhan swallowed and stared at Shen Xin.

"Have you all heard of'beautiful food'? This term describes girls who are beautiful, but in food comics, the delicacies you draw must have this effect! Absolutely the "shape" and "color" of the food, It is revealed through brushes and dotted paper."

To some extent, the depiction of food in "Spirit of the Halberd Eater" has indeed reached the stage of ‘beautiful and delicious’.

Lu Ning nodded, this is her task.

"Also, the world's food is too numerous to enumerate, and there are so many varieties. It is great for a person to spend his entire life and reach the peak in one type. Therefore, a character can only be good at one type of cooking. In cuisine, for example, Sichuan cuisine, Sichuan cuisine, and Sichuan cuisine, each cuisine can have a very powerful role, and it can give the role a distinct personality."

"Brother Xin, the eight major cuisines are not limited to Sichuan cuisine." Xi Muhan reminded.

"I know, but I don't know other cuisines." Shen Xin is very honest, because in "Spirit of the Halberd", the only Chinese cuisine that can be named is Sichuan cuisine.

All his knowledge related to food comes from the two comics "Little Head" and "Shi Ji".

"..."

Lu Ning and Xi Muhan looked helpless, but no one was perfect. For people like Shen Xin, who even struggled to cook instant noodles, it was quite difficult for someone like Shen Xin to know a Sichuan dish and the level of the chef.

They can't demand too much of Shen Xin.

Seeing that the two girls were silent, Shen Xin thought that he was thinking about what he said just now, and he felt a little bit of being a teacher in his heart.

"Mr. Shen, you can actually teach a few lessons to the newcomer author." Yan Fei took Zuo Yuan's and walked over.

Shen Xin opened his mouth slightly and almost agreed. Fortunately, he accepted the words in time and waved his hand slightly, "That's fine. Have you never heard the words'Wen Wu First, Wu Wu Second"? What I said, Others don’t necessarily agree. At that time, someone excitedly refutes a few words, then I’m just asking myself to be boring."

When creating online novels, some experienced authors wanted to tell novice authors something for free, but they were ridiculed by the novice authors. This kind of thing happened more than once.

Therefore, just talk to someone who is familiar with it. There is no need to give lectures specifically to the newcomer. In addition, the newcomer may not listen to it.

Everyone's time is equally precious, and he does not need to waste time in these areas.

After Shen Xin finished speaking, he glanced at the manuscript in Yan Fei's hand again, "Original?"

"Teacher Zuo, although it is two or three days later than the agreed time, but the quality is not bad. There are 32 pages in total. I hope Mr. Zuo can work harder."

After hearing this, Shen Xin nodded slightly.

He didn't know much about these awards, and he didn't want to participate. After all, he has jumped out of that stage. UU看书www.uukanshu. Com has no extra energy to take care of these things.

"By the way, there is one more point... Mr. Zuo is good at being more gentle, that is, the daily plot. The same is true for this short story. I told him at the time that the comics had better highlights. I also said a few more special words, such as the main character. It might not even be a human! So he took a cat as the protagonist and wrote this story from the perspective of a cat."

"Cat?"

Shen Xin was taken aback, the name of a novel immediately appeared in his mind, and then he shook his head.

Not the same, this is a comic!

Shen Xin thought of another comic-"A Dog".

"If the protagonist is a cat... it's okay. However, to use the cat as the protagonist, or to describe the whole story from the perspective of the cat, requires the cat's human mind and inner activities to reflect the progress of the whole story."

Readers need a sense of substitution, even if it is a cat, let the reader feel its thoughts.

Yan Feibi made an "ok" gesture, and his face was slightly relieved.

"How is Mr. Zuo now?"

"Not bad. He is also waiting for the opportunity, and now "ComicFuture" also lacks good quality manuscripts."

"By the way, I heard that you are also working on apps, how are you now?"

"Now it is in closed beta, and there are more comics. But there is too little new content. Now editor Zeng Yue is worrying about the new comics. New authors are all sucked away by Duoman.com’s'Golden Paintbrush' award, and the pressure on the magazine is too much. Great." Yan Fei sighed.

Shen Xin nodded.

From the current point of view, it seems that Doman.com has affected "ComicFuture". I don't know how the magazine will respond next. This made him look forward to something.

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