My Cartoonist Guide

Chapter 577: Shen Xin's judgment

Wang Wenhong blinked, holding a pen in his hand, unable to write a word for a long time.

Shen Xin divided the scores into four parts, namely "Story", "Split Mirror", "Painting Skills" and "Spots & Effect Lines". The total scores are 50/20/20/10 respectively.

Although there is no comment, where the points are deducted, at least in Wang Wenhong's opinion, it is clear at a glance.

The fact is also true.

He read a few comics carefully, then looked back at the scores, analyzed them carefully, and felt that the deductions made sense.

Even though there were several points that contradicted his opinion, after careful reflection, Shen Xin's judgment was more accurate.

This is no way.

He can judge whether the "plot" is good or bad, but he is inferior to Shen Xin in terms of "slices" and "painting skills". Moreover, even in the plot, he and Shen Xin have some disagreements. After Shen Xin finished the manuscript, he asked about the grading rules.

"Able to use the storyboard to fully express the content of the story. At the same time, the use of dotted paper and wiring is also good, and the content of the story is boring and boring..."

Suddenly hearing Shen Xin speak, Wang Wenhong was startled, and quickly picked up the pen and recorded Shen Xin's words.

However, after hearing the comments, he can already feel the score of this comic, which is definitely not more than 60 points.

"55 points."

really……

Hearing this score, Wang Wenhong had a black line and another low score... No, this score should be in the top 10...

Teacher Shen, you pressure the points too low, right?

Wang Wenhong sighed in his heart, but did not say anything.

Just like Shen Xin said, anyway, it is to accept 10 people, from high to low admission.

Actually, Shen Xin's heart was even more depressed. He watched the cartoons for a night, but these cartoons...not to mention it.

Comics and in fact are consistent in many places. After all, they are essentially telling stories—an interesting story.

Some, the front seems to be stable, but the ending is often unexpected, and even makes people clap their hands. The typical representative is O. Henry.

However, in order to achieve this effect, people have done a lot of foreshadowing, making readers feel "unexpected and reasonable".

The plots of these authors can't stand scrutiny at all, the first content is superficial, and the last page is heavy. After reading it, I was at a loss.

There are also some comics, big play settings, full of densely packed characters, making people look big.

Please, even if it's not Xiaobai's kind, but at least it should be understandable, right?

Shen Xin doesn't recommend short comics using too complicated systems, because tedious content is difficult to express through limited space.

In a sub-grid of the comics, there are restrictions on how many dialogs there are invisibility, and there are too many dialogs, which will appear bloated.

In the same dialog box, there are also certain requirements for the number of words. Therefore, the author may have to over and over again and consider many times in a dialogue, in order to express more meaning in as few sentences as possible.

Although there are no written rules, these are all accepted by the author.

Just like the Internet, many are just one sentence.

Can web authors not know what a passage means—well, a few people may not really know—but they do this to cater to the screen of the mobile phone.

Of course, the author can write long paragraphs, but those words are piled on the screen, and many readers don't want to read them. However, one sentence by one sentence makes the reader feel very relaxed when reading.

Therefore, there are some unwritten regulations.

If an author says that he only writes long paragraphs, this is of course also possible, and this is not a dead rule. However, it is the reader who decides whether to pay in the end, and the reader must be satisfied.

Going back to the comic, the dialog box covers the character's face, and still doesn't modify it...Do you really think you are a rich old thief? There are no characters on a page, all words are, so someone will buy it?

Seeing these settings, Shen Xin really had nothing to say.

"Brother Wang, don't let me see the future submissions for "Young Future"." Shen Xin sighed.

When Wang Wenhong heard Shen Xin speaking, he immediately picked up the pen.

"Brother Wang, in the future "Young Future"...it's not right, I almost said."

Wang Wenhong thought it was a comment, and wrote a few words, but suddenly realized that it was wrong, and hurriedly strung half of the sentence.

"I said, Teacher Shen, can you stop a word suddenly, it's very embarrassing."

"Huh?" Shen Xin looked up at the frustrated Wang Wenhong, suddenly realized something, he smiled, and then quickly waved his hand, "I just sighed."

"I also know that the quality of the author has declined. As a result, this is an essay for "Young Future". The grade is definitely not as good as "ComicFuture". In addition, the "Golden Paintbrush" award has indeed attracted a large number of powerful newcomers. Network serialization."

Shen Xin raised his brows slightly, which is also true.

"You can't do nothing, right?" asked rhetorically.

The current situation of "ComicFuture" is that there are definitely more high-income authors than Doman. However, the magazine is facing a problem. Limited by the "capacity" of a single magazine, they can't eat all the serialization.

"Look, now we are waiting for the magazine app to come out. By then, the magazine will also cooperate with the app and take action. The magazine will not let this pie out."

Shen Xin nodded and scanned the manuscript in his hand.

The author and the platform are only a cooperative relationship, not an employment. Only when there is competition, the author can maximize the benefits.

"Huh?" Shen Xin glanced at the manuscript in his hand subconsciously and couldn't help but snorted.

"What's the matter?" Wang Wenhong asked quickly.

"The Cat Returning to School? I remember that Mr. Zuo's cartoon is a cat, right?" Shen Xin said.

"Yup."

"Then it will be interesting." Shen Xin turned over the manuscript seriously.

He has seen Zuo Yuan's basic skills, which are relatively good ones. The only problem is the inconsistency of rhythm and style.

As long as he is aligned with the road, Zuo Yuan may not be able to reach Han Ye's level, but it shouldn't be a big problem to stabilize at tenth place.

The tenth place in "ComicFuture" has already allowed professional cartoonists to earn a lot of money.

The story takes place one afternoon. After lunch, the protagonist returns to the classroom. After being stunned by a cat falling from a tree, he is sent to the medical room, but the protagonist’s soul rushes into the cat’s body, from the perspective of the cat~www .lightnovelpub.net ~ Observe the life of the entire campus.

There is no big ups and downs or fluctuations in the whole story, just through the observation of the classmates, the plot is fed back to the readers.

There are not many dialogs in the entire comic, but there are some light dialogs. Generally speaking, there is no too burning plot, but it is very comfortable to read.

"How about this one?"

Shen Xin tapped on the desktop twice, holding the signature pen, tapped twice, and scored.

"Plot, 43; sub-mirror; 16; drawing skill: 16; dots & effect line, 7; total score: 82. Edit: (crossed out)."

It was the first time that Wang Wenhong saw Shen Xin write the editor, although it was omitted later.

"Manga is a good manga... However, serialization is very difficult to create. You pass this sentence to Sister Yan in private. This is my opinion." Shen Xin said seriously.

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