Rough?

"No? If the comics are rough, can they win the ‘Golden Paintbrush’ award?" Yan Fei blinked, feeling incredible.

"The roughness I'm talking about is compared with the front of this comic, not compared with other comics." Shen Xin spread his hands, "Students who usually score 100 points in the test suddenly scored 90 points, but the second place was 89 points. , You said, what is the difference between 100 points and 90 points?"

"The scores are different." Xi Muhan said.

"Yes. The score is different, but it doesn't affect the ranking. However, I haven't read other award-winning comics, and I can't judge the decline in the quality of "Doomsday Rescue" and how much impact it has on the award." Shen Xin yawned and paddled Put it on the dining table.

Xi Muhan picked up the pad, read it carefully, and looked at Shen Xin suspiciously, "Is the quality of the comics OK? Where is it going down?"

Shen Xin rubbed his forehead and smiled bitterly: "Xiao Han, you may not be able to see it yet. Give the pad to Sister Yan. If you look at the previous 27 words carefully, and compare with the following comics, you should be able to detect the difference. By the way, I Mainly refers to the storyboard."

It is not that Shen Xin underestimated Xi Muhan, but for cartoonists, the storyboard is not easy to grasp.

Part of the reason why many illustrators with outstanding painting skills cannot become best-selling cartoonists lies in the storyboard.

The storyboard of illustrations pays attention to better showing the sense of the picture, and the tangled serialization of comics, how to attract readers with every sentence, is particularly critical, and this is the main function of the storyboard.

Xi Muhan is not a cartoonist. She usually only reads cartoons. After handing it over to Lu Ning, Lu Ning has to make further changes.

In terms of storytelling, she still lacks.

As a professional editor, Yan Fei has his own understanding of storyboards, but there is still a certain gap between the level of top comics.

Xi Muhan was a little unconvinced, but she also knew that Shen Xin was right. She was not a professional cartoonist, and she hadn't been a professional cartoonist for a long time. She didn't have a deep understanding of the storyboard, so she could only give the pad to Yan Fei.

Yan Fei took the pad with a puzzled look. After reading the storyboard, she felt that it was not bad. When she turned to the next episode, she realized that it was episode 33, so she could only turn forward to find episode 27.

After reading this story, Yan Fei compared the two storytellings again, and then nodded and said: "So that's it..."

"What's the matter?" Xi Muhan asked hurriedly.

"Wait a minute... I'll look at the contents of the first few words and the next few words..."

Yan Fei is also not sure, turning 5 words forward, from 22nd to 32nd.

Shen Xin took advantage of this time, drank a bowl of rice porridge, and ate fried dough sticks. Wang Wenhong also knocked on the door and came to the studio with other assistants.

"What are you doing?"

Wang Wenhong also scooped up a bowl of porridge, and saw Yan Fei quickly sliding the pad, while Xi Muhan stared at Yan Fei like a kitten, and suddenly became curious.

"Nothing."

Shen Xin noticed that other people's sights had also moved, and the subject also changed.

This kind of thing, if you talk about it in private, if it spreads out, it will not be good for him, Duowang.com and masker, after all, he also feels it, and there is no evidence.

Wang Wenhong doesn't matter, but with the addition of five assistants, he knows a lot more.

"I'm looking at the award-winning work of Golden Paintbrush? The magazine must be very nervous when such a young author suddenly appears." Yan Fei handed the pad to Shen Xin, "I think... there is a little difference."

If Shen Xin did not remind, she would only read it once and would not consider it in the storyboard, but the comics at the back of "Doomsday Rescue" are indeed inferior to the previous 27 episodes.

Shen Xin took the pad, pulled out a napkin, and said to the others: "You eat first, I'll go up."

Xi Muhan's eyes widened, as if a sigh of relief was in his heart. Seeing that Shen Xin didn't mean to say anything, Yan Fei also picked up the bowl and started eating, so she stood up and walked out with Shen Xin.

On the second floor, when Shen Xin was sitting in front of the workbench, Xi Muhan also pulled a chair and sat on the opposite side of Shen Xin.

"Brother, what do you mean? The storyboard is different again, and the comics have become rough again. I don't understand."

Shen Xin scratched his head and said in a puzzled way: "These are just my guesses. If they are spread, people will think that I am jealous of masker, have red eyes, and spread rumors against him..."

Shen Xin didn't like to judge a person behind his back.

"No. No one will say. Besides, you don't need to be jealous of him... I just want to know the reason." Xi Muhan was a little depressed.

It's like giving a puzzle but not an answer. If Shen Xin didn't say it, she would probably be absent-minded all day long.

"The reason is simple. Compared with "Ding Shi", the first 27 episodes of "Doomsday Rescue" have better storytelling. After 27 episodes, the storytelling of "Ding Shi" should be better. Generally speaking, a comic has arrived. In the later stage, the plot or structure of the story will collapse, but the painting skills and the storytelling will not decline. The latter two things require experience.

"Just like writing a novel, in order to attract readers, the early stage will be very exquisite and exciting. Later, in order to extend the length of the work, the novel may be loosely structured, or even ‘watered’, but the author’s writing style is improved.

"The strange thing about this part of the comics is that the storyboards are different, which makes the story verbose."

"Why does this happen?"

Xi Muhan picked up ~lightnovelpub.net~ and carefully compared the 27 episodes with the 28 episodes, and he also saw the name.

The split lens in the first sentence is indeed very clever, while the split lens in the latter sentence appears dull and blunt. The content that can often be expressed by one split lens is divided into two or three, and the rendering power shown by the split lens is also reduced. Some.

The style of painting is stable and the story is more attractive, but it looks a bit long-winded. Moreover, the fighting place is not as smooth as the front, and the key fighting shots are often omitted.

"I guess someone has repaired the front of "Doomsday Rescue"." Shen Xin said his guess.

"Huh?" Xi Muhan was startled, "Is there such a person? Who will fix it for him?"

"Of course there are. For example, Sister Yan has repaired it for you, right? It's just that Duoman.com has a feature. Its editor is not responsible for the specific cartoonist. Some comics have shortcomings in the structure."

"Then why didn't he continue to find someone to repair?" Xi Muhan asked in confusion.

"I guess there are two possibilities. First, no. As long as the quality of a comic is high enough, even if the later story collapses, it can have good results. The length of the 27 chapters is already very long, and the story gradually becomes high. .Tide, unless there are major fluctuations in the plot, readers who like this comic may continue to read it.

"Secondly, Masker can't afford it. This person's understanding is not worse than Yelaoshr, and may even be better than Yelaoshr. Ask people of this level to check the work, and Masker estimates that it will cost you money. Besides, He may also draw comics himself, so that he has no time to watch "Doomsday Rescue" again.

"Moreover, from cost considerations, it is the most cost-effective to paint the previous content. The fact is also true, "Doomsday Rescue" indeed won the Golden Brush Award." Shen Xin stretched his waist and speculated.

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