My Cartoonist Guide
Chapter 783: Dissatisfied
Before, Shen Xin rarely modified the ending of the comics, except for "The Soul of the Game".
However, it is imperative to revise the ending of "Soul of the Game".
The level of Huaxia Go is different from that of Zone 11. One is rising and the other is falling.
Take it now, only a few years later, Zhen Xi has already carried the banner of Huaxia Go and competed with Han Go, and even has an advantage.
Therefore, it is reasonable for Xiaoguang to win against Gao Yongxia in the end.
When Shen Xin changed the ending of "Soul of the Chess", it was a matter of course.
The handling of the ending of "DN" is different from that of "Gossman".
In fact, the ending in the movie is very suitable, but the ending is logically problematic.
L used the rules of DN and wrote his name on one of the DNs in advance. In this way, his life span was only 23 days.
Rem, who often meets with L, cannot be unaware of the changes in L's life, but in the movie, there is no indication.
In addition, in the movie, the packet drop plan was used to replace the DN in Haisha’s hands, but there was another problem. In the movie, the investigative team installed a camera in Haisha’s room and witnessed her move. The process of writing names on note.
But in the comics, it is different. Yue told Haisha not to use DN in your residence.
After careful comparison, it is not difficult to find that in the comics, Yue’s actions are more in line with Yue’s personality-the duel between him and L has not yet ended, and Yue cannot relax.
Logic... is the end of this comic, which needs to be considered the most.
With a little carelessness, it is possible to draw a terrible ending.
For this reason, Shen Xin had to spend an afternoon sorting out the rules of DN, and then it took another two days to sort out the next four episodes.
Shen Xin understands that these four words have some shortcomings, so he eagerly wants to hear other people's opinions.
Especially Yan Fei, as the editor in charge of "DN", she must have a deeper understanding of "DN".
In order to make time, he can ask several assistants to go back early, leaving only him and Wang Wenhong in the huge studio.
After talking with Yan Fei on the phone, Wang Wenhong went out to buy dinner for Xi Muhan, while Shen Xin turned over, looking for logical loopholes.
Things like logic often don't make mistakes in big places, and it's often in small places that need to be cautious.
Shen Xin had to be careful.
It took about an hour before Wang Wenhong returned with the meal, a total of three, Shen Xin did not expect that he even had one.
After speaking, my stomach is indeed a little hungry.
Shen Xin opened the lunch box and grinned, "You got all the lion heads?"
In the white lunch box, there are four lion heads, which are full of rich color, and people can't wait to swallow them.
That's... the tableware used is wrong.
"What's the matter? I haven't improved my life for a long time, so I'm relieved." Wang Wenhong smiled, and opened a lunch box with the cooked eel shreds inside.
Based on Shen Xin's understanding of food, he knew that a lion head would be good. He had eaten other dishes, but he never remembered the name.
The scent wafts from the lunch box and fills the air, making people salivate.
As soon as he opened the third lunch box, Wang Wenhong's cell phone rang. He glanced at the text message and immediately stood up, "Yan Fei is here, I'll open the door."
"Hurry up."
Shen Xin nodded, Wang Wenhong went downstairs, and Yan Fei came in to open the door.
"Where is the end?"
When Yan Fei saw Wang Wenhong, she couldn't wait to inquire.
"are you not hungry?"
"Hungry, but I want to see the ending of "DN" more."
"Then you have to eat first, maybe you have to stay up all night?"
"Ah? Why?" Yan Fei blinked, puzzled.
"Ms. Shen is not satisfied with the ending. He said that he needs to modify it." Wang Wenhong smiled bitterly.
"what?"
Yan Fei was taken aback, and Shen Xin rarely asked her opinions. Therefore, she was surprised by Shen Xin's actions.
"I know what you think, but the reason is not difficult to understand. When the cartoonist started, he created very fast, because there was an outline in his mind. However, as the length of the story increases, the logic of the story is good, and the picture is neat. Regardless of the degree, there will be a downward trend. Many people think that it is the cartoonists who take the works not so seriously.
"Actually, the reason is not so simple. There is an interval between every two works of cartoonists. During this period, the author can determine the subject matter of the lower comics, and at the same time, it is also a period of recovery of energy and physical strength. Many times, people feel that The quality of the manga has declined in the later period. It is because the author is not serious or not prepared enough, but he has never considered exhaustion of energy and physical strength...
"Sometimes, even if the author knows what kind of plot is the most ideal, but because of lack of energy or physical strength, the author is powerless. This kind of thing should not be uncommon?
"Ms. Shen hasn't taken a break for a long time, and he serializes two books at the same time. The consumption of physical strength and energy is twice as much as that of ordinary cartoonists, or even more."
While they were talking, the two went up the stairs.
"So, Teacher Shen's physical condition is not good?" Yan Fei suddenly realized, and then felt that it would cause misunderstandings, and then explained, "I want to ask, is Teacher Shen's physical strength or energy tired?"
Shen Xin has been working continuously for too long~lightnovelpub.net~ The last time the issue was suspended was during the Chinese New Year, and if we go forward, it is estimated that it will be the time when Shen Xin was injured and rested.
After "Steel Refining", Shen Xin was not serialized on "ComicFuture" because he was preparing for "DN", but at that time, "Y’s" had already been updated on Duoman.com.
From this point of view, it is indeed possible for Teacher Shen's physical strength and energy to reach the limit.
Wang Wenhong shook his head.
"Not quite right. Actually, the ending of "DN" has already come out, but Mr. Shen is not satisfied, so he let you come over and make changes. It is estimated that tonight, you may stay up all night."
Stay up all night?
Yan Fei frowned.
It seems that things are not simple.
"The quality is not good?" Yan Fei was puzzled.
"No, actually, I don't think it's a problem, it matches the current story...maybe Teacher Shen thinks more?"
Shen Xin took advantage of the time when the two went upstairs to print out two copies of all the follow-ups of "DN".
"Sister Yan, the meal that Brother Wang deliberately bought for you, just came back, is it still hot?"
Wang Wenhong opened his mouth, trying to refute, but the words got stuck in his throat, but when he saw Shen Xin winking at him, he forcibly resisted it.
"He is so kind?" Yan Fei showed no mercy.
"Of course. Brother Wang went to a restaurant far away to buy dishes."
Yan Fei frowned. The other dishes were okay, it was the eel dish, she looked a little panicked.
Many girls have inexplicable resistance to this long and sticky food, and Yan Fei is no exception.
"Don't look, let's eat the meal first." Wang Wenhong handed Yan Fei a box of rice and a bottle of ice cola, "I'm full, I guess it will be very busy later."