"In fact, "Ding Shi" also has such a plot, but the effect is not very good." Xi Muhan tangled.

Since they draw food comics, of course they should also refer to high-quality works of the same type. In this respect, District 11 does a better job, and there are some well-known gourmet comics.

In these comics, a similar technique was used, and they tried to use it once, but the readers did not approve it.

Yan Fei nodded, she also had an impression of that time.

"I remember it was a tofu dish." Yan Fei asked.

"Yes. It's at the front of "Ding Shi"." Xi Muhan explained

After two people said this, Shen Xin also remembered the situation at the time. He remembered that the protagonist’s dish was "Fish Head Tofu Soup". He replaced another fish head and shiitake mushrooms and cooked the dish.

"I think... your failure is not the method, but the two of you."

Shen Xin doesn't know how to cook, and she can't say anything about it.

After hearing what Shen Xin said, Xi Muhan pursed his lips in dissatisfaction. Lu Ning did not say a word, but the depression in his heart was also written on his face.

Shen Xin sighed and said: "This is really your problem. First of all, the choice of ingredients is wrong. Everyone is familiar with the taste of tofu and fish head. You just draw flowers, and readers can't imagine changing a fish head. The taste will be greatly improved. And do not lower the IQ of the judges and teachers, they have not eaten anything? As a result, if you eat a fish head, you will make a fuss. What will readers think of them?

"So, you have to start from places that the judges can't see, such as using a certain spice that matches the ingredients better, or applying a layer of sauce on the surface of the ingredients... These can surprise readers.

"In addition, when telling the cooking process, there are two situations. The audience or the judges see what the readers take for granted. Even if they haven't seen it, they will think that this operation is fine. In addition, there is also a part of the protagonist. To tell the judges about the principle, this seems to be an exchange between the protagonist and the judges, but it is actually telling the reader that the protagonist has taken a lot of thoughts on this dish. One change is not enough, and it is better to have one dish. Four or five places are good."

When Xi Muhan heard this, his brows furrowed and his expression was depressed.

There are four or five obvious changes to a dish, but how about the principle? Uh, it is estimated that botany and chemistry will be involved...

This requires her to have a clear understanding of the characteristics of each ingredient and the reasons for the increased taste of the dishes after the recipe changes.

In other words, there must be theoretical support.

It's easy to say, but hard to do.

Xi Muhan lifted his cheek thoughtfully.

"Be sure to let the protagonist use skills that most readers can't think of, and finally use these content to turn defeat into victory. This is cool. Next, it is Lu Ning's problem..."

Shen Xin took a deep breath and paused for a while, Lu Ning's heart immediately tightened.

"Your storytelling still can't express the emotions of the story to the maximum. Some places need to accumulate emotions, and some places need to make emotions explode. It depends on the actual situation. When the role needs to be out of line, when does it need to be overlapped? You must also have a clear understanding of the grid. For you now, it’s no longer enough to be able to use storyboards. You are now standing in the position of a taizhu cartoonist, and you need to be more strict with yourself."

Shen Xin stood up, then pulled out a copy of "ComicFuture" and turned to "Ding Shi".

This is about the chefs entering the arena one by one, the host is introducing the topic of the competition, and the readers in the stands around have heated discussions.

After reading it quickly, Shen Xin closed the magazine, picked up a pencil, quickly drew five of the pages on the white paper, and forwarded it to Lu Ning.

"The nominative frame of each page is the focus of the entire page of comics. When readers see this page, they will consciously move their eyes to this sub-frame. Whether this page attracts the reader's attention is very important. The degree depends on the nominative part of this page. For another example, some trapezoidal divisions will put pressure on the reader’s vision and know when to use them. I believe you know these sub-picture techniques, the key is to use them to integrate the story The charm is expressed."

Lu Ning looked down at the hand in hand with a sad face.

Fragmentation, composition, and mirroring are all the use of comic language. Shen Xin's words are more detailed, and she can also understand the meaning of the line-she must improve in the use of comic language, otherwise, it may be really like Shen. According to Xin, it is difficult for her to surpass "Ding Shi" in the future.

Shen Xin said a lot today.

At first, Xi Muhan and Lu Ning still had some dissatisfaction. After all, the two of them are already well-known creators in the industry, but after Shen Xin said these things, they were thoughtful.

Lu Ning had a deeper understanding of Shen Xin's words.

These words are not advanced, let alone her, a little bit of standard teaching materials on the market will be involved, but reading the teaching materials and understanding them are completely two things.

Even she can say something, but when it comes to real operation, it's not the same thing.

What Shen Xin said to him was actually telling her that "Ding Shi" could continue to strengthen the expressiveness of the storyboard, and at the same time, it drew 5 pages so that she could compare with the comics.

If she can get some insights from these pictures, it is estimated that she will be on a higher level in terms of comics.

"By the way, Lu Ning, I have another very important thing to remind you." Shen Xin saw that Lu Ning was holding his painting, and couldn't help but remind him again.

"Huh?" Lu Ning looked at Shen Xin with a confused look.

"The few pages I drew are just examples. If you give the same original work to different cartoonists, you will draw different storyboards. My understanding of this plot is drawn on paper and I have these five pages. What you want to express may not be the same as mine. Maybe, your understanding will be better in the future. Don't get into the horns~lightnovelpub.net~ Shen Xin exhorted.

"I see." Lu Ning nodded quickly, "Thank you, Teacher Shen, I seem to have some understanding of drawing cartoons."

"I can help you." Shen Xin breathed a sigh of relief, and looked at Xi Muhan again. "Xiaohan, your task is much heavier than Lu Ning. The story is the root of comics. The basic points of "Ding Shi" are in your hands. ."

Shen Xin is really helpless for food. His understanding of this kind of comics still rests on the few comics he has read in District 11.

"I see." Xi Muhan took a deep breath and nodded heavily.

Shen Xin spends a long time telling the plot, so she has to make a special time to organize the conversation this afternoon.

The idea may be clearer, but the creation is more difficult.

Then again, the works created by the creators racking their brains may be more attractive to readers.

Thinking about it this way, Xi Muhan is full of energy again.

She will write scripts for Shen Xin in the future, so she must seize every opportunity to improve her strength.

Seeing the two people come downstairs, Yan Fei also breathed a sigh of relief, "It's good to be a teacher."

"I can't, I'll mislead others." Shen Xin shook his head, "If it weren't for Xiaohan's work, I wouldn't say so much. I also want her creative level to improve quickly."

Yan Fei raised his eyebrows. Shen Xin's words were true. As someone else, he might not be able to spare such a long time.

"By the way, Mr. Shen, the final volume of "DN" is about to be released, the first edition of two million copies."

Shen Xin rubbed his nose.

Two million copies...I don't know what kind of results "DN" can achieve, I have some expectations.

First set a small goal, such as 1 second remember: Shukeju

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