Mao'erniang brought the milk tea up, Shi Qun immediately picked up the coffee and took a sip.

Fan Yinmo pulled it out and immediately saw the cover of this sentence, and a huge line of words came into view-"The Devil's Family Education".

It reads like a cartoon related to family education, this subject...Fan Yinmo hasn't seen it much.

With a hint of doubt in his mind, Fan Yinmo also officially began to read this.

The protagonist is a person who has average academic performance but works very hard.

Family members have always been worried about his grades and deliberately went to the tutoring center to hire tutors, but after three or four trials, the grades did not improve, and the parents were helpless.

A text message from the parents’ mobile phone was an advertising text message from an organization that claimed to be the “Devil’s Tutor”. With the mentality of giving it a try, the parents hired a tutor from the “Devil’s Tutor” organization.

As a result, the tutor helped the male lead academically, but the male lead's grades still did not improve significantly. Through cross-examination, he learned that someone was bullying him in the school. After learning the cause of the incident, the tutor helped the protagonist to knock down the bully, and his grades also improved.

The story is very vulgar, but Fan Yinmo finds the story very interesting.

The protagonist being bullied by his classmates is narrated through the protagonist's mouth, and the atmosphere of the whole story is not depressing. When reading, the reader's heart will not feel uncomfortable.

In addition, when reading, "The Devil's Family Education" has some sections that pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, and readers can feel the "family education" attribute of pretending to be x.

Fan Yinmo read 40 pages in one go, feeling still unfinished in his heart.

Of course, page 40 is just a pick. If you want to serialize, you must modify it, and many details must be modified.

As for how to modify... how does he know? You have to ask a better cartoonist for this.

Tamagawa Haruka is already serializing now, and he certainly won't have time, so he can only find someone else.

"By the way... Is this your first word?" Fan Yinmo curiously asked.

"That's all. This is a short comic... If you submit a manuscript, it's impossible for the magazine to give me a long-form serialization opportunity at the beginning, right?" Shi Qun entangled.

Fan Yinmo nodded: "That's true. However, in general, newcomers need to hand in the manuscript if they want to hand it over to the magazine."

"Original... manuscript?" Shi Qun's face turned pale, a little tangled, and he forgot to drink the coffee in his hand.

Fan Yinmo knocked on the table twice, resting his chin, lost in thought. Shi Qun looked at Fan Yinmo expectantly, hoping to get some experience and advice from him.

However, Fan Yinmo is thinking about another thing, which is related.

The two people stayed in a stalemate for a long time, and no one said a word.

"Can I take this back first? In such a short period of time, it's difficult for me to read this in detail. Moreover, if it needs to be revised, it won't work for a day or two. As you know, I'm still serializing comics."

Fan Yinmo had a general direction in his mind, sitting upright, looking at Shi Qun.

Shi Qun's face changed slightly, staring at the manuscript in Fan Yinmo's hand, a little embarrassed.

"Are you short of money?" Fan Yinmo immediately changed the subject when he saw Shi Qun's face showing hesitation.

"Ahem, there are some." Shi Qun nodded.

"In this way, I still have 20,000 yen here. You can use it first...or else, I will pay you back." Fan Yinmo casually took out two 10,000 yen banknotes from his wallet.

They go to school in District 11 and use District 11 money.

"Then...that's not necessary." Shi Qun waved his hand, "Although I don't have much money, there is still no big problem with a normal life."

"This little money is nothing to me, and you don't need to pay it back. I think you worked hard to give you the money. The domestic comics market is huge, and you will definitely have the opportunity to make a splash in the future." Fan Yinmoyi He said with a straight face, "I don't want people like you to be trapped by money."

Shi Qun's eyes widened, and his heart warmed when he looked at Fan Yinmo, who looked sincere.

He was really afraid that Fan Yinmo took it and left.

If Fan Yinmo sincerely refused to give it to him, he would be unable to argue.

But now 20,000 yen is placed in front of him, saying that he is not tempted, that is false. With this money, even if Fan Yinmo really swallowed it privately, he felt that he would not lose.

That's right, if this short story can be serialized, he will definitely earn more than 20,000 yen. But the premise is that he has to be able to serialize.

He drew similar ones, no less than five copies, and didn't make a single yen, let alone 20,000 yen.

After all, this is a bet.

If he wins, Fan Yinmo will give him the revised version, and he will give Fan Yinmo a sum of money back after a big deal.

If he loses, he gets 20,000 yen in vain, which is much better than not getting anything at all. It's just the first draft fee he got-although a little bit less.

After successive setbacks, people are very realistic, and Shi Qun is no exception.

"Teacher Fan, I..."

"Needless to say, no matter how much, just don't take me as a friend." Fan Yinmo waved his hand, and did not give Shi Qun a chance to refuse~lightnovelpub.net~ I took it back and pondered it. If possible, wait for class. I'll give it to you in time. If you don't agree, put it here, and I won't ask for the 20,000 yen. Lao Shi, it's up to you. "

Fan Yinmo said so, Shi Qun was too embarrassed to refuse any more, so he said, "Then I will trouble Teacher Fan."

When he got it, Fan Yinmo didn't have to stay any longer. He said to Shi Qun to "look back" and stood up.

While checking out, he ordered another sundae, milk tea and strawberry cake for Shi Qun before leaving the cafe.

Shi Qun repeatedly thanked him and watched Fan Yinmo leave.

"Unexpectedly, Fan Yinmo's people are so good? I should get acquainted with him earlier..." Shi Qun dug a spoonful of sundae and put it in his mouth, feeling unexplainably comfortable.

Fan Yinmo clamped under his armpit and called for a rental. After talking about the location of the apartment, the rental slowly drove forward.

At this moment, Fan Yinmo couldn't help laughing.

Today's harvest far exceeds his imagination.

This is indeed of high quality. Although he can't make better suggestions for revision, he also knows that this comic has flaws. And he was able to read this, and found it interesting, showing that the flaws are not concealed.

Of course, if you want to produce results, you must polish it. This is one of the reasons why he wants to take it. He needs to listen to the opinions of professional cartoonists to see if it has the potential to become a big hit.

As for swallowing this...I will do it only when my brain is drawn.

If it were a long comic, he might have thoughts of moving, but what Shi Qun showed him this time was just a short story with many flaws.

What's the use of short stories?

Useless.

He didn't care, but Shi Qun.

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