When Kong Xian opened "The Gate of Destiny's Stone", the first thing he saw was a young man in a white coat, talking on the phone, behind him was a building.

A large instrument smashed into the top floor of this building.

The color of the color is so heavy that the background is a little fuzzy, making Kong Xian feel a kind of depression in her heart. But whether it is the composition of the color pages, or the drawing of the characters and scenery, they are all in place, and the colors also highlight the tone of the whole novel—deepness.

Sure enough, at the beginning of the first chapter, there are many unique places.

After Gang Lun witnessed Hong Liqi's death, he saw Hong Liqi again. It should prove that he had crossed, but he didn't know it because he had crossed into the "parallel world".

There are quite a lot of traversal texts in light novels, but most of them are that the protagonist has an accident and travels to another world, while Ganglun returns to the parallel world because of a text message.

However, it is better to say that it is a parallel world, because Ganglun's crossing has changed the things around him.

The angle of the story is good, and this kind of writing has never appeared, but the essence of this novel is still traversing.

This was the first thought that Kong Xian had in his mind after seeing a text message from Gang Lun to Ah Zhi, but the surroundings changed.

Afterwards, after the author changed his writing, Ganglun returned to the laboratory and talked with Zhen Youli and Azhi.

I have to say that another's painting skills are really good. The illustrations in the article clearly draw the appearance and personality of the three characters.

However, the story suddenly jumped from the death of Hong Liqi to daily life, which really makes people a little bit confused.

"Stone of Destiny" has only four chapters updated on the app. It tells that Hong Liqi responds to Gang Lun’s doubts in an open class. After that, Gang Lun meets the "Flashing Shiatsu" Tong Mengyu...

Kong Xian finished reading the four chapters in one sigh without any effort.

After confirming that it was the last page of "The Gate of Destiny", Kong Xian's face showed regret.

"How?"

"Yes. Although I'm not sure if others can understand it, the flow of the story is very good, and it makes people have the urge to read on... Others don't know, but I am looking forward to the progress of the story."

Kong Xian turned the last page and saw the comment area of ​​"Stone of Destiny", and noticed that a post said there was a follow-up plot, so he clicked in curiously.

"I also think it's okay, but the words are not concise enough. Some light novels on the Internet have better literary talents, and the descriptions of scenery and characters are better than it."

"Do you know why this novel does not have a large introduction character?" Kong Xian asked.

"why?"

"No need. No matter how good the author's depiction of the character is, can the color page be intuitive? No. If you don't believe it, you can find a novel without illustrations, read two or three chapters, and compare with this novel, you Hong Liqi and Zhen Yuli still came to mind. Why do we need words for things that can be done with pictures?"

"Eh?"

Zeng Yue doubted whether he had heard it wrong, a light novel editor recommended illustrations here.

"But, novels should pay more attention to writing style, right?"

"I know, this person named another, if the novel was written by him, his writing is okay. There is some water, if it is to be published, it must be'squeezed'." Kong Xian explained as he watched just now "Many people pay too much attention to literary talent. In fact, novels pay more attention to the writing ability of the author. Of course, many newcomers lack the writing ability, so it looks a little naive."

"The writing power of this novel... is not enough, right?" Zeng Yue hesitated.

Manga also pays attention to the brushwork, which is reflected in the dialogue.

Limited by the length of the dialogue, the cartoonist should try to use as few words as possible to express the words of the character.

A cartoonist is not a writer. He can only do as good as he can, but he can't reach the extreme.

"It's not enough, it's okay. It's much better than the light novelists selected from the Internet. The writing ability is more complicated, but also very vague, such as line drawing, such as calligraphy, which belong to the category of writing ability, but light novels It’s not that complicated. The key point is whether the author can express the images he imagined in his mind.

"Some authors imagine all kinds of exciting pictures in their minds, but they fall on paper, but they are as plain as water... Of course, "The Gate of Destiny" is also plain, but apart from the first chapter, it talks about everyday life. Ganglun and Ah Zhi are going to listen to the public class, so the novel looks dull, but when Hong Liqi falls in a pool of blood, readers will feel nervous again.

"At the same time, another will also arouse the emotions of readers. Therefore, it seems very plain, but it can attract readers. Many authors who have just entered the industry, or even those who have been in the industry for a few years, may not be able to grasp it."

"So powerful?" When Zeng Yue heard Kong Xian say this, he also put away his contempt for the novel.

"Another also has shortcomings, and it is also very obvious, that is,'water.' His pen power is enough in this novel, but it is not concise enough. If it is to be published, it is estimated that some content will need to be revised...another_online?"

Kong Xian whispered another's Weibo name, picked up the phone on the coffee table, and found another's Weibo based on the name.

"...A light novelist driven by interest...the number of followers, 13,000... Chapter 19?"

Seeing the latest Weibo, Kong Xian immediately became energetic.

"Chapter 19?"

"Huh? Has it been serialized to Chapter 19?" Zeng Yue asked curiously.

"You do not know?"

"I don't know, I didn't read the comment area." Zeng Yue picked up the pad and typed in another's Weibo name.

The top Weibo is the novel of Chapter 19.

Kong Xian just nodded, but his eyes fell on the phone screen.

There are 15 chapters that she didn't read, which is not long to talk about, but after careful evaluation, she found that these 15 chapters contain more than 200,000 words.

When a reader encounters his favorite novel, he never thinks that the novel is too long.

More than 200,000 words, which sounds like a lot. When Kong Xian began to read the remaining "Stones of Destiny", she felt that time passed quickly, and before she knew it, the sky had dimmed.

Zeng Yue yawned and saw that all the editors in the office had gone, and then glanced at Kong Xian who was reading the novel, with a helpless expression-she didn't return to her editorial department. What if something happened in the editorial department?

"Hey, Sister Kong, it's time to go," Zeng Yue reminded.

"Oh, I see." Kong Xian stood up, rubbed his eyes, and glanced at the time, 20:22.

"It's so late?" Kong Xian was a little surprised.

"Yes, everyone is gone..." Zeng Yue let out a dry cough, "How does the novel read?"

"Not bad, better than most of the light novels serialized on the Internet... The quality is still very high. But I don't know why, but I always feel that the atmosphere is a little depressed. It is probably related to the illustrations."

"illustration?"

"Yeah. There was a scary illustration just now, a photo of a puppet with blood..."

"Listening to you, it feels like a ghost story."

Zeng Yue turned off the lights in the office, Kong Xian stood up, looked down at the novel, but walked out of the light-reading office.

Zeng Yue shook his head, and there was a trace of suspicion in his heart--is it really that good-looking?

When he turned off the last light, Kong Xian, who was standing outside the door, suddenly screamed, making Zeng Yue tremble all over.

"what's happenin?"

"No...nothing." Kong Xian hesitated in red and red.

On the elevator ~lightnovelpub.net~ Zeng Yue's gaze kept staring at Kong Xian. Her brows were frowned and her expression was so nervous that Zeng Yue was also curious about what she saw.

It wasn't until the elevator reached the first floor that Kong Xian let out a long sigh of relief, as if she had walked out of a novel.

"What did you see? So fascinated." Zeng Yue was a little curious.

"Zhen Youli is dead." Kong Xian's tone was flat.

"Huh? How did you die?"

"It's very complicated to say. Ganglun uses the time machine to go back in time, but no matter what he does, there is no way to save Zhen Youli..." Kong Xian sighed, "If I guessed correctly, the first 17 chapters It's all foreshadowing. It wasn't until Chapter 18 that the story became really exciting. I left a private message to another, hoping to publish this novel..."

"What did he say?" Zeng Yue asked with curiosity when he rarely saw Kong Xian caring about a novel so much.

"No answer. But for him, this should also be a good opportunity? After all, not every novel has the opportunity to be published." Kong Xian smiled.

She is still very confident about this.

If it is not for publication, there is no need for the other party to serialize it.

At this moment, Kong Xian's cell phone rang.

She quickly picked up the phone, arched her eyebrows, and smiled: "With...he replied."

Zeng Yue smashed his mouth, and Kong Xian secretly found out that Kong Xian was lucky and turned to a book, all of which were of high quality.

But soon, he realized that Kong Xian's expression was not right, as if he was a little angry or disappointed.

Is there something wrong?

"What's wrong?" Zeng Yue asked quickly.

Kong Xian bit her lip and took two deep breaths, as if she had been bullied, with a little anger in her words, "He said, no interest."

"..."

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