After the first episode of the "Stone of Destiny" serialization, the comment area became the most intense place for light reading and discussion.

"Check in first, then read the comics."

"It turned out to be a black and white comic!? The author is too old-fashioned, right?"

"If you like to see, you can see, if you don't like to see it!"

"That's right, as long as the comics are interesting, it's ok? Why do we have to fight?"

"Have you guys watched it? I think it's a shame to put "Stone of Destiny" on light reading. This comic should be serialized in "ComicFuture"."

"why?"

"I think the overall quality of the picture is higher than that of "Ding Shi". The script is also better than "Ding Shi". Teacher Lu's painter has made great progress."

"Others are hard to say, but the scripts of the two comics can't be compared, right? One is gourmet with passion, and the other is logical. The genres are different. How to compare?"

"The first chapter of "Stone of Destiny" looks so confused, a little bit hard to understand."

"This is your first time watching "Stone of Destiny", right?"

"Yes."

"It is recommended to read novels first."

"But when you read the novel, isn't it fascinating?"

"That's true."

"The novel is going to be published in a separate book, and it will cost 100 yuan for two volumes."

"Puff (vomit blood), it's so expensive. If two copies are only 70 yuan, it would be fine."

"Xue Da drew 10 color pages and 20 black and white illustrations for "The Gate of Destiny Stones", and the booklet is still a hardcover edition. Is it worth the money anyway?"

"I think the money is very valuable, but there is no money."

"Wait for the first edition to see how the quality is. If there are no flaws, there is nothing wrong with buying a set of single-line books, and they are used for collection.

"Hope not to change too much."

"It's basically the original version, but the wrong sentence has been revised, and it is said on the Weibo of "Qi Chuang Library"."

"That's okay. I was afraid of changing too much, so I changed the ending."

"If the magazine dared to change the ending, Teacher Another would be the first one to be unwilling."

"That's true, I should be scared too (smiling wry)."

"Oh, I still want to see the color pages, what should I do?"

"Whether it's color manga or black and white manga, as long as the quality is high, you can enjoy it when you read it. High-quality black and white manga definitely exceeds low-quality color pages. There is no doubt that "Stone of Destiny" belongs to the high-quality grade! highly recommended!"

...

On Manjia.com, "The Gate of Destiny's Stone" has become the center of the topic, and the discussion area and comprehensive discussion area have found "The Gate of Destiny".

"Ms. Lu is still great, this is simply the "Gate of Destiny" in my mind!"

"Damn it, the scene where Gunlun found Chris's body was a spread! The screen is too small, and the content of the screen is too much, it looks a little bloated."

"I watched it with a pad. It was a little better, but the effect was average. Although the screen is bigger, the impact is not enough."

"Using a monitor! I use a computer monitor to watch it, so comfortable!"

"There is no website, right? What do you think?"

"There is an emulator! You can see it by downloading the light-reading app on your computer, and you can see many details. It is really comfortable. It can be said that there is absolutely no comic quality in light-reading, which is better than " "Stones of Destiny" is better."

"What about "The Devil's Family Education"? Xueda's style of painting is also very good."

"Xue Da's painter is good, but the painter is not Xue Da, and it looks a little awkward."

"Satisfied? "The Devil's Family Education" is better than most of the colorful comics."

"On the ranking list of Light Reading, "The Demon King's Family Education" and "The Gate of Destiny" are already vying for the first place."

""The Devil's Family Education" temporarily has the advantage, right? It has released two episodes, and the third episode will be released soon.

"One thing to say, the quality of these two comics is no less than that of the first few comics in "ComicFuture"."

"Guess, "The Gate of Destiny Stone" or "The Demon King's Family Education", which one has the better achievement?"

"Then I don't know, wait."

"Time will tell us the answer!"

...

After Lu Yingxue learned that the "Stone of Destiny" comics were about to be serialized, time suddenly became longer.

At the beginning, he wanted to draw this cartoon, but when Lu Ning was the first to publish it, he could only give up.

If the cartoon of "Stone of Destiny" meets his expectations, then forget it, otherwise, he will definitely "comment" this cartoon on the Internet.

Waiting for the "Stone of Destiny" serialization, he read it the first time.

The characteristic of black and white comics is that the lines are more expressive, and it also gives readers room for imagination.

When reading the comics of "Stone of Destiny", he did feel these characteristics, but he always felt that the pictures were a bit awkward. Moreover, because he was reading on his mobile phone, the emotions accumulated in the spread could not be released, and it also made him feel uncomfortable. He was a little depressed.

Later, he changed the 12.9-inch pad and used a two-page display, and the advantages and disadvantages of the "Stone of Destiny" comics were clearly displayed in front of him.

The storyboard of "Stone of Destiny" is better than "The Devil's Family Education". Neither Shi Qun nor Lu Yingxue can compare to Lu Ning, and there is no way to deny it.

But "The Gate of Destiny Stones" also has shortcomings. Since the first episode took place in the broadcasting building, many places have to deal with the change of light and shade, which involves the display of light and shadow effects. Lu Ning has made mistakes in this regard.

Among them, the most prominent painting of this feature is precisely the spread-the light source is outside, and Hong Liqi is lying in the small room.

When encountering this kind of plot, it is best to draw from outside the door. The contrast of light and shadow makes it easier to express details. But this way, there will be another problem. The sense of the picture is not strong, and the reader cannot pass through the scene. Ren's expression changed to express his shock.

If you look at Gunlun standing at the door from the inside out, it is likely that it is backlit, which makes the light and shadow difficult to handle.

In fact, the same is true. The light and shadow processing on this page is not good, but the sub-mirror chosen by Lu Ning can indeed express the atmosphere of the picture better.

Lu Yingxue's storyboard is average, and he can't figure out how to deal with this storyboard better. Thinking of this, he feels a bit regretful-if the details are handled more carefully, it will be fine.

Just when Lu Yingxue sighed secretly, Shen Xin also called Lu Ning to his studio.

"You can't handle this page." Shen Xin pointed to the spread on the pad and looked up at Lu Ning.

"I also know, teacher, although web comics are not suitable for spreads~lightnovelpub.net~, spreads can make readers feel more shocked. I believe that "Stones of Destiny" has the opportunity to publish a single book. The charm of the page can be used.” Lu Ning explained.

"No. The angle of the splitter is backlit, so the effect of this splitter is greatly reduced, it's best to change it." Shen Xin said.

"But, this...I...this storyboard, I thought about it for a long time..." Lu Ning was a little anxious, she still felt that this storyboard best fits the artistic conception of the novel.

"Simple." Shen Xin took out a piece of paper and quickly drew the cross-page split on the white paper. At the same time, he drew a box on the right side of Ganglun's head and next to Hong Liqi, "Here it is. Close-up of the facial expressions of two people should be better. Take time to change it? Anyway, serialize it on the Internet and talk to Editor Zeng Yue. He should be able to help you. As you said, after all Publishing a pamphlet."

Lu Ning rubbed her forehead, a little regretful.

She drilled the tip of the horns at the time, and even forgot this method. Although it is a spread, it does not mean that there can be no close-up shots. Moreover, since there are only Hong Lisu and Gangren on the scene, there is no need to draw too formal, as long as they are next to the two, draw a scene that expresses the look.

"Teacher, I'll change it when I go back... By the way, is your short story finished?"

"Wait for the enthusiasm of the first episode of "The Gate of Destiny"? It should be fine in three or four days. Shen Xin's gaze is aimed at Yan Fei who is quarreling with Wang Wenhong in a low voice, "Sister Yan, the dialogue will be translated quickly. It's going to be used."

"Half completed, and the remaining half will be ready soon." Sister Yan answered quickly.

Lu Ning was at a loss, and she couldn't figure it out.

How to draw a short story and still need translation?

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