Qianwumei Also Wants To Be a Cartoonist
Chapter 43: Reader cohesion
Anyi is not a preference for sweets, but the delicious and unique Tiramisu cake is her favorite dessert.
The layout of this pastry shop is also very elegant, with a heart-warming atmosphere. While eating delicious pastries in this atmosphere, An Yi is on the surface while continuing to get angry while eating, but in fact, she is eating. , Her anger gradually disappeared, and she wanted her brother to coax her to pet her anyway!
Otherwise, I’m not happy, I’m not happy, I’m not happy!
Anritsu doesn't like sweets, and to be honest, the cakes in this pastry shop are too expensive. Although the family's financial situation has improved, he himself is reluctant to eat such expensive cakes.
So he just sat there, admiring the way his sister was eating the cake, and seeing her sister pretending to be angry while eating, in order to attract his attention, he was still faint on the surface, but he wanted to laugh in his heart, so occasionally arrogant. Sister, it's so cute.
When his sister finished eating, he finally couldn't help asking: "Okay, are you not angry?"
Anyi finally didn't turn her head to respond to her brother, she just hummed: "If I go home and play games with me for two hours, then I will forgive you mercilessly."
Anli sighed, and said helplessly: "Okay, when you get home, let's continue to play with you."
"Hmm!" An Yi cupped her cheeks with her hands, looked up at Anli with big eyes, smiling like a flower.
Seeing his sister's smiling face, Anritsu finally felt relieved.
It is really troublesome to coax such a sister... But it is also very happy and warm.
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After shopping and going home, continue the game—
"Brother, you really are a waste, it's boring to play with your pig teammates!"
"Who used anger to threaten me to play with you before?"
"Huh, I have to rely on my old brother!"
"Hey! It's too much, does any sister say that to my brother?"
Although they were fighting like this, the relationship between the siblings became better again. After Anri, she felt that she had been played with by her sister. She had learned to change ways to let him coax her and pet her. Even so, he The relationship with my sister is more intimate than ever, more and more like real brothers and sisters, not fathers and daughters, but the majesty of the elder brother seems...
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In early June, the manuscript of An Yi's 5 episodes of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" and the two articles of "Seven Weapons" were finally sent to the editorial office of "The Kingdom of Takeshi".
Ding Hobei, who had already wanted to urge An Yi, when she received An Yi's original manuscript, she was secretly stunned when she saw the number that exceeded her imagination. You know, this is not a sub-draft of the work, but a completion. Good manuscript!
This kind of speed...really, a god-like speed!
Ding Hobei was not in a hurry to review An Yi's long-form series "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", because she still has prejudice against this long-form series that An Yi started on her own.
She feels that if An Yi wants to draw a long series, she should put her background in the Spring and Autumn and Warring States period she is best at!
That’s right, through the previous article "Yue Nv Sword", which won the Silver Award for the "Rising Star" Newcomer Award, Ding Hebei, after repeatedly appreciating it many times, came to the conclusion that Anyi has a very good understanding of that era. The background, costumes, customs, and folklore that she completed alone are very suitable for that era. It can be seen that her historical foundation in the Spring and Autumn and Warring States era is extremely profound, as if she personally went back to that era and observed everything about the ancients at close range. generally!
Although the aerial martial arts comics placed in history, there is no need to strive for excellence like Anyi. After all, everyone reads the comics to see the plot, not the background. If you draw the background so well, it is nothing but flattering. For the blind—Ordinary readers, who would study the folk customs and dressing of the Spring and Autumn Period and Warring States Period?
Martial arts comics, the most important, are **** fights and happy gratitudes, allowing readers to vent the injustices encountered in reality through the hearty martial arts comics. This is why the martial arts comics are called adult fairy tales.
However, An Yi’s striving for perfection and the true historical atmosphere outlined by it can make it easier for readers to substitute in. This is like historical online novels. If the writing style is antique, the characters’ behavior and habitual words are also of antiquity. It will give readers a sense of substitution, as if they have really gone to that era, and if the characters in it have a "modern vocabulary", it will make people act out in an instant, and it will only make readers feel that this is a historical skin. Xiao Baiwen...
However, to write antique historical texts requires a very high level of authorship, and it also takes a lot of energy. For commercial works, this is not worth the gain.
But such an attentive author can make readers more cohesive!
An Yi's "Yue Nv Sword" also created the same effect!
Ding Hebei still remembers that after the publication of "Yue Nv Sword", the readers were very enthusiastic about writing letters to the magazine. Naturally, these letters were written to Teacher Yi An, and the magazine society forwarded these letters.
Except for those who kept complimenting Mr. Yi's for his paintings, "Awesome, great, refreshing, and endless aftertaste", "I didn't expect that'Xizi Pengxin' actually came like this, haha" "I hope Mr. Yi'an will quickly draw a more interesting long story. In addition to "novels" and so on, her most impressive reader comment is—
"The key to this short story is that Qingna's swordsmanship is completely beyond the imagination of all our readers. Ten thousand people are invincible... If you can write a long story, it will definitely look better. Like that teacher Duanmu Longsheng's "Spring and Autumn Trip with the Sword" is called Spring and Autumn Martial Arts The first episode is actually a bit of a running account, but a spirit of energy has always been there, so the content framework is also good. Teacher Yi An’s painter is better, and the layout of the story is better. If he comes to paint the long series of Spring and Autumn and Warring States , It can definitely become a classic work that surpasses "Journey to the Spring and Autumn with the Sword"!"
This kind of thinking undoubtedly made Ding Hebei feel that she had coincided with each other. She originally decided to let An Yi take a good look at the reader's suggestion, but she didn't expect An Yi to be so self-willed.
In addition to this one, UU reading www.uukanshu.com also has a female reader who claims to have never read martial arts comics. She commented: "Rather than treating martial arts comics, it is better to look at romance comics. Although the comics are large in length. I'm all writing about Wu Yue swordsman's contest, Yue Guo's revenge, and even Fan Li's yearning for Xi Shi, but this is actually a story of unrequited love in which "the drunk man doesn't mean to drink". It is better to say that Ah Qing is a chivalrous girl. She is just a girl who has inadvertently mastered the swordsmanship. Her sword is not for galloping the rivers and lakes, nor is it for defending the family and defending the country. The sword is not a weapon, so that the sword is not a murderous weapon, nor is it a hatred to kill. This is a natural state, the state of'god and man without merit, saint without name', but this state is not a result of hard thinking and hard work, but a habit developed by chance. There is a sword, but a man is ruthless. This is just a fruitless unrequited love. Like all heartbroken first loves, the sadness and grace are gradually becoming more beautiful. It has nothing to do with the sword of the Yue woman, and has nothing to do with the sword of the Yue woman, even with Ah Qing has nothing to do with himself, it is only related to our hearts. This is a beautiful and decisive image, which is embarrassing and praiseworthy. It is the first time I read martial arts comics, I was lucky enough to see such a classic short story. I hope You can see more works by Mr. Yi An next!"
From these readers who are willing to write so many letters and send them to Teacher Yi An, we can see that An Yi has the ability to gather her die-hard fans!
What a pity... Why not expand "Yue Nv Sword" into a long story?
Ding Hobby was angry again, she was too lazy to take a look at "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", and first reviewed "Peacock Ling" and "Jasper Knife".
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