"My Homeland"

　　—If the miracle has a color, it must be Chinese red.

　　Five thousand years ago, we fought the flood like the ancient Egyptians;

　　 Four thousand years ago, we played bronzes like the Babylonians;

　　Three thousand years ago, we thought about philosophy like the Greeks;

　　 Two thousand years ago, we fought as bravely as the Romans;

　　 A thousand years ago, we were as rich as the Arabs;

　　 And now, we are playing a long and short time with the Americans!

　　 For five thousand years, we have been at the poker tables in the world, watching the rise and demise of one opponent after another.

　　 If the miracle had a color, what color would it be?

　　 I said, it must be China Red!

　　...

　　 "Hiss!!" Li Yanhong took a breath, shocked inexplicably.

　　 Despite the expectations, Li Yanhong found that she underestimated the composition.

sure! This beginning is so shocking!

　　 looked down impatiently, "This..." Li Yanhong was shocked again.

　　 "This is... an argument?"

　　 began to look at the style, she thought it was prose, but along the way, the examinee actually wrote an argumentative essay in prose sentences.

　　 The three elements of an argumentative essay, argument, argument, and argument, are all rubbed into prose.

　　 First of all, "the color of miracle China red!" This is the argument.

　　 Then, one by one, the arguments composed of beautiful prose styles came into view.

　　 "Chinese civilization is one of the five civilizations that independently cultivated food crops."

　　 "Chinese civilization is one of the four civilizations that independently domesticated livestock."

　　 "Chinese civilization is one of the 17 civilizations that have independently emerged languages."

　　 "Chinese civilization is also one of the earliest civilizations to use ironware."

　　 "Foreigners said that China is rising! And we said, no, we are revival!"

　　 "Because, on the stage of the world, we have been the leader for thousands of years, and now we have only been short of seats for a hundred years."

　　 Looking further down, in order to demonstrate that the unyielding spirit of the Chinese nation has existed in ancient times, the article wrote:

　　 "China never lacks miracles, and Chinese people are never afraid of danger!"

　　 "Because, whenever disaster strikes..."

　　Hunan people would say, "If China is going to die, unless the Hunan people die!"

　　 Shaanxi people would say, "Two wolves fight and Hu'er shakes the sky, how can a good man die for the country?"

　　 Sichuanese will say, "If you don't retreat from foreign enemies, you will not return to Sichuan!"

　　Henan people will say, "The country is still like this, why should I pity this?"

　　Jiangnan people would say, "Send a message to pedestrians to stop and cover their noses, and the living is not as sweet as the dead!"

　　Hebei people also said, "There are many generous and tragic people in Yanzhao."

　　 The people of Guangdong and Guangxi even said, "Drinking ice for ten years, it’s hard to cool blood!"

　　 The man in the northeast would say, "How about swearing to death? One fight to fulfill his duty!"

　　 This is our China, the world is full of people who don’t want to be slaves!

　　 This is our Chinese. On the spine that bears the weight, we carry the indomitable national loyal soul!

although....

　　We were once trampled by foreign iron hoofs;

　　We were once smashed by imperialist artillery;

　　We were once driven by the enslavement of the invaders;

　　 We were once abandoned by the world! !

　　 However, we have never given up on China, and have never forgotten the religious teachings of our ancestors.

　　 Just like today, the hundred-year flood is about to overthrow thousands of miles, but the line of defense built by the Chinese sons and daughters of flesh and blood is raging and fearful!

　　 just to create another miracle, one person can conquer the truth of heaven!

this! It is the sons and daughters of China, the unyielding backbone!

this! It is the color of miracle, the color of China!

　　 Come on, my color!

　　 Come on, my country!

　　...

"good!!"

　　 Li Yanhong's shooting case is amazing.

　　 An old teacher who has been teaching Chinese for more than 20 years was so emotional and sweating.

"OK!"

　　 "......"

　　 "......"

　　 "......"

　　 All the examinees stared at the invigilator in a daze, "Okay? What's so good? Why don't you let people stay? How about the exam!"

　　 Xu Qian frowned with snow-white brows, and she was suspicious: Can that guy get along with "good"? Isn't it just for him? What did he write?

　　...

　　 And Li Yanhong also knew that she was gagged, cleared her throat awkwardly, and then had to become solemn again.

　　 Judging from her years of experience, there may be something wrong with this composition.

　　 Stylistic prose colloquial essays, sufficiently novel. The structure is impeccable and perfect. The wording is also as much as possible, and it is amazing enough.

　　 Especially the sentence: China is not a rise, but a revival!

　　From top to bottom, everyone is talking about the era of the rise of China, but he actually did the opposite.

　　 is not a rise, but a revival!

　　 In just one sentence, how much strength and confidence does it convey? It is not an exaggeration to say that it is a strong paper back.

　　 And the most important thing is that starting from the first sentence, it is almost a point of knowledge, and every sentence has allusions.

　　 For example: "If China is to die, unless the people of Hunan die!" From Yang Du's "Hunan Youth Song"

　　 "Don't retreat from foreign enemies, vowed not to return to Sichuan!" It was the Sichuan army leaving Sichuan.

　　 "The country is still like this, why should I cherish this?" From "Justice Poetry" by ***

　　 "There are many generous and tragic people in Yanzhao." From Han Yu.

　　 "Drinking ice for ten years, it's hard to cool blood!" Liang Qichao, "The Complete Works of Drinking Ice Room."

　　 At the level of Li Yanhong, I only know these allusions. The rest, even she can't tell the source.

　　 This, this is a perfect composition!

　　 Thinking of this, Li Yanhong became nervous again, and read the whole composition carefully twice again.

　　 has no typos, and even the punctuation marks are correct.

　　 Li Yanhong's heart loosened, great!

　　 can't help but exclaim again:

　　How many years has Shangbei not written a full-point essay? How many years hasn't the Harbin area written a full-point essay?

　　 It's incredible!

　　 opened the test paper in front of Qi Lei again and threw it out disgustingly.

　　 "What is it? Bai blind, this is a good composition!"

　　 is a little bit dumbfounded. Such a poor student, but with such a good writing, is simply a waste.

　　 There is no way, this is a system that values ​​scores, and more importantly, averages. If there is any shortcoming, no matter how strong the others are, it is useless. You can't get to a good middle school, let alone a good university.

　　 Not to mention Qi Lei except for this composition, everything else is a mess.

　　 Although Li Yanhong likes this student very much, judging from his grades, no matter how strong his writing ability is, he is destined to miss out on good educational resources.

　　 The college entrance examination three years later is destined to be mediocre.

Pity!

　　...

　　 While Qi Lei used an essay to surprise the invigilator, the examination room No. 14 is not far from the examination room No. 17, and there are still 20 minutes before handing in the papers, but Wu Ning has the desire to die.

　　 At this time, Comrade Wu Xiaojian was holding his gold-rimmed glasses, looking desperately at the composition topic and a piece of untouched composition paper.

　　 "Is it really "My..."? How did Qi Shitou get caught up?"

　　 Wu Ning thinks he is very unlucky, very unlucky.

　　 Among the three brothers, his academic performance is the best. Even if he fails to enter the key high school, he can still stay within the bargaining line.

　　 He played well in the morning, thinking that maybe he might have the opportunity to move directly to the key line.

　　 As a result, I came to him in the afternoon.

　　 Just now, when he saw the composition question, he was silly. UU reading www.uukanshu.com really made Qi Lei right! ?

　　 And myself... why didn’t you believe my brother once? If you make a draft in advance, even if it is a belly draft, it will not be stable?

　　 It's okay now. Originally, there was plenty of time to write the essay, but he was frightened and froze for a long time. When he came back to his senses, there was only a little time left, and he still had no ideas at all.

　　 Wu Ning wanted to cry, "What should I do? Qi Shitou, you are a bastard, but you have hurt Laozi!"

　　 scolded Qi Lei ten thousand times in his heart.

　　 What's the use of scolding, the test is still to be tested! The great goal of directly crossing the key line and saving a few thousand dollars for my father is still to be achieved!

　　 Anxiously, I think carefully, finally decide... I can only take advantage of it.

　　 gritted his teeth and wrote on the paper: "My Dad".

　　...

　　 "My father is the director of the Education Bureau, and he is very busy every day..."

　　 eloquently portrays a conscientious director's father like an old farmer, who will finish the work before handing in the papers.

　　 Hmm, not bad! Master scoring give me "dad" face?

　　 Wu Xiaojian thought so.

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　　 (One more chapter at 8pm)

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　　 From the beginning of the book, I saw a lot of old faces, and replied "Long time no see" over and over again... I was full of emotions, and my mood was hard to calm down.

　　 Thanks to the leader of Nanke Beauty, the leader of "one and three poisons", and the leader of "12 insects".

　　 I also thank 125, the moon, and Xiaoxiao Xiaoyu for their rewards.

　　 There are also those old friends who vote for monthly tickets, give rewards, and leave messages for greetings.

　　 Cangshan loves you, the next life... why? Speak for yourself!