Rebirth of the Comic Queen

Chapter 228: .Good to be a teacher

"Jiangmi, look, the storyboard of this page of the manuscript, if you modify it in this way, the tension of the picture will be more intuitive, and here..." At noon, as soon as Nanako came over, Jiangmi couldn't wait. Holding Inuyasha's drawing, he asked Nanako for advice.

Nanako pointed to a drawing and talked freely, "There is also this drawing. The content on it is because Kagome accidentally shot the jade of the four souls into countless fragments with a demon-breaking arrow.

This is the Arrow of Demon Breaking and the Jade of the Four Souls. It is precisely because the jade of the Four Souls is broken that triggers the following plot, so its importance is self-evident. Look at your drawing, the expressiveness of the picture Obviously not enough.

The dignified jade of the four souls is actually such a small black spot, and it shatters after an arrow is shot, it looks like a muddy one, so it can't show the identity of the jade of the four souls at all. "

Jiangmi nodded, and said thoughtfully, "Uh...Is that so? Listening to what Nanako said, the picture seems to be a little lacking."

"Right." Nanako picked up the paintbrush and took a piece of blank drawing paper. With a few strokes, she drew a sketch on the paper. While drawing, she said to Jiang Mi: "The previous plot processing, Jiang Mi What you did is pretty good, and you have created a vivid image of the jade of the four souls for everyone."

Nanako continued: "But in this drawing, Jiangmi's handling of yours is a bit awkward.

Now that you have spent such a large amount of pen and ink to introduce this jade of four souls, you should always implement its extraordinary features.

For example, monsters all want to **** this jade of four souls because it can bring powerful power to the monsters, and we can design such a plot, a very weak monster, in the chaos, very lucky Got this jade of four souls.

Then this weak monster immediately undergone earth-shaking changes, becoming stronger, and the protagonists Kagome and Ergouzi who burst out and suppressed have no power to fight back.

After reflecting the power of the jade of the four souls in this way, the mission of this little monster is fulfilled, and we can redesign a plot next.

For example, this little monster was just a low-level monster before, and had no fighting awareness and experience at all, so it was enough to give it a strong power in an instant, and it would be enough after one burst.

We can design it so that it has powerful power, but it will not be used. In the end, the protagonist and Ergouzi found a chance and defeated it.

Then, the focus should be on the outline of the picture. The monster was defeated and wanted to escape. Then Kagome shot an arrow. Not only did the demon-breaking arrow destroy the monster, it also coincidentally shot the jade of the four souls and hit it into The fragments. "

When she was speaking, Nanako had sketched out a rough sketch. The woman drew a bow with both hands, the string was like a full moon, and then shot out instantly, like a meteor rushing to the moon, and the surrounding pictures were drawn randomly with two or three strokes, the whole arrow. Nanako deliberately painted it as a streamer.

Only at the tail of the arrow, Nanako sketched very meticulously, and specially painted a ripple-like streamer trace behind her, which can be felt at first glance. The speed of this arrow is very fast and unusual. .

Then, the arrow pierced through the monster's body like mulch, and hit the jade of the four souls in the monster's body, and then the picture stopped here.

The jade of the four souls and the arrows were all shining, stalemate with each other, and then the light on the jade of the four souls dimmed first, and then the arrows burst open, and a spider web-like crack appeared on the surface of the jade of the four souls.

The last picture is a violent explosion, skyrocketing light, countless four soul jade fragments like shooting stars shot out in all directions, across the sky, dragging a long tail flame and disappearing in place.

Nanako turned to look at Jiang Mi and said, "Jiang Mi, look at it. This is the general idea in my mind. Does it feel that the picture becomes a lot fuller in an instant?"

Jiang Mi is now speechless, and it is true that the expert will know if she is there. She is indeed the teacher Miaomei in the creation. Any draft, can make people feel her skill.

It’s just such a hand-drawn sketch, and it feels more exciting and outstanding than the sketch that I have carefully sketched and revised. Whether it is the splitting technique or the expressiveness of the picture, this sketch is better than my own original manuscript. Much better.

In fact, this is also due to the environment. In the present world of Dragon Kingdom, and even in the world of comics, the development of entertainment culture such as comics is far behind Nanako's previous life. Expressions like Nanako's are placed in the previous life. , That's almost the same way of expression as bad street.

But it’s never seen before in the Dragon Country. Once it’s taken out, no matter where it’s placed, it will give people an eye-catching feeling. No wonder Jiang Mi is amazed by it, mainly because it has never I have seen such a way of expression, so I feel so novel and amazing.

If in a few years, wait until this way of expression spreads out from Nanako's hands, is learned by others, and everyone sees more ways of expression like this, and everyone becomes accustomed to it, then this kind of image will probably not be the same. It will shock everyone again.

Well, of course, it doesn't mean that this way of expression will be overwhelming. If you can really practice such a method to the point of perfection, it will still make people feel excited at a glance.

Don’t you see, in the previous life, this way of expression has not disappeared since it was created? There are still people using it, the only difference is that your skill is enough.

Jiang Mi felt that Nanako was more powerful as she watched it. She felt that if she copied these sketches of Nanako into her own comics, she would be able to upgrade her comics to several levels in an instant!

"Nanako, you are so amazing, I...can you send me this sketch? I want to take it back and observe the performance techniques inside." Jiang Mi asked, but she hugged her tightly. The sketch refused to let go, maybe even if Nanako refused her, she would definitely take these color pictures back for collection.

"Haha, it's just a draft of a few chapters drawn randomly." Nanako smiled, "If you like Jiangmi, give it to you. If you can learn anything from it, that's even better."

"Yeah..." Jiang Mi's little chicken nodded repeatedly, as if she had obtained the treasure, she had to put away a few drafts. Seeing her soft appearance, it seemed that she was not holding a few pieces of paper, but precious cultural relics. The same, "I must collect these drawings carefully!"

Nanako nodded, "Well, come on Jiangmi, if you can learn the performance aspects from it and master it proficiently, then you can definitely become an official cartoonist."

At the same time, Nanako is still secretly saying in my heart, at that time, I will officially invite you to join my acg kingdom, so that you can give full play to your talents!

"I won't live up to Nanako's expectations!" Jiang Mi replied very solemnly as if he had noticed something.

"Alright." At this time, Cheng Yao, who had been waiting for a long time on the side, came over and pulled Nanako away. Before leaving, she said to Jiang Mi: "Jianmi, you have occupied Nanako for the whole morning, and you also got it. Nanako's precious manuscript, if you look at it to your pleasure, the big teeth are exposed.

Surely you got a lot of advice, right? Then I would like to congratulate Jiangmi on your early birth and becoming a manga master like Nanako in the future.

And you can't monopolize Nanako, you have to teach time has come, so now Nanako belongs to us, we also want Nanako to give pointers, Jiangmi, you go to digest the guidance gains. "

After finishing speaking, he ignored what Nanako thought, and pulled Nanako over without hesitation.

"Ha, Teacher Miaomei, please give me your advice next!" Cheng Yao took Nanxi to play with treasures~lightnovelpub.net~ and bowed to Nanako with a smile, Nanako had no choice but to take their drawings from them without a smile. , Looked at it.

Well, because of previous misunderstandings, neither of them used the comic ideas that Nanako gave them, but instead conceived works of their own. In this way, Nanako could only give them some pointers in the storyboard and plot.

"Sister Cheng Yao, your cartoons are for girls' love, and they are for everyday fun. There are not many subjects on the market. If they are done well, they should be very marketable."

Cheng Yao raised her hand and turned Nan Xi next to him, and said, "Look, let me just say it. The theme of girl love is definitely a matter of life. Nan Xi, you had to make a dark end-of-day theme. It sounds It just gives people a feeling of heavy haze, how could it get hot."

"Shut up." Nan Xi gave Cheng Yao a white glance. "This girl doesn't bother to draw comics like Mary Su without a brain. I like this dark thing."

Nanako didn't care much about the laughter between the two of them, but looked at the manuscript in her hand earnestly, with her brain turning at a high speed, looking for the deficiencies above, as well as suggestions for them.

After searching for comics of the same type as the two in his mind, and after comparing and thinking, Nanako gave Cheng Yao and Nan Xi a few suggestions. Looking at their joyful expressions, it was obviously inspired by them.

After pointing to the two of them, Nanako turned his gaze to Cui Ye, who had been standing silently on the side. This guy seemed to be much calmer, and now he had no other thoughts about Nanako.

Neither the utilitarianism he had before, nor the hatred towards Nanako after being cleaned up by Uncle Bing, he just really wanted Nanako's advice.