Regarding his comic dream, Cui Ye didn't care if others would not wait to see him. Yiyan let Jiang Mi, Nan Xi and others circulate his work one by one, and then asked them what they thought. w.Q

"How is it? Xiaomi? Do you think there is something wrong with my Dark Blood?" Cui Ye asked Jiang Mi with an eager expression on his face.

Jiang Mi opened her mouth, a little bit unbearable to hit Cui Ye. She had the same first impression as Nanako. After only reading the content of the first chapter, she determined the impropriety of Cui Ye's imitating work.

This similarity is too high! Although Cui Ye deliberately modified the world background, deleted and added some new elements, his work of taboo blood has never got rid of the category of giants, and the content has a strong giant style.

What's more, the content of the first episode is basically the same as the story at the beginning of the giant. The set similarity is more than 60%, and the plot has not changed significantly from the gods and demons. How could the audience buy such a work.

If Cui Ye really publishes this work and the attacking giant at the same time, Jiang Mi is sure that within three days, Cui Ye will definitely be sprayed with blood!

For two extremely similar works, the normal person's first reaction is definitely that one person imitated or copied another person's work. It is also easy to distinguish between who is following the trend and the other person.

Look at the fame, look at the quality and content of the work! Unfortunately, Cui Ye has no advantages in these two aspects. How can he be a man who has not even reached the level of a formal cartoonist, and Nanako, the newly-advanced rookie master Miaomei teacher?

In addition, the most important thing about a work is its content and quality. In this regard, Cui Ye’s Dark Blood Race was thrown out several streets by the attacking giants. !

Cui Ye saw that Jiang Mi hadn't spoken for so long, and he was eager to know, "What's the matter? Xiaomi, you say something, give me a suggestion, so that I have a bottom line."

"Um..." Jiangmi's words came to her lips, but in the end she didn't say anything. Although her childhood sweetheart, because of Nanako's affairs, she had some suspicions for him, but her previous friendships still existed. Yes, she really didn't want to hit him out loud.

"Zhu, is there anything hard to say? Since Jiang Mi is unwilling to say it, let me tell you." Cheng Yao suddenly said.

She didn’t catch a cold with Cui Ye a long time ago. She thought that when the Eighteenth Manga Department was first established, a few people met for the first time. At that time, she still felt that Cui Ye was a good-looking kid, although he looked a little sick and soft. Yes, but there is a little bit of butter flavor.

Cheng Yao’s first impression of Cui Ye was pretty good. It’s a pity that Cui Ye didn’t put her in his eyes at all. Who can she hide from her arrogance?

Good guy, the original Cui Ye was really treated like the protagonist. He was from a good family background, and he looked like some girls' appetite, and he was only a boy in the entire Eighteenth Manga Department.

With childhood sweethearts and Jiangmi around him, there is also a high-quality legal loli Nanxi in the Eighteenth Manga Department. This unfolds, who dares to say that it is not the treatment of the protagonist?

But he didn’t realize that Nanako and Cheng Yao, who were ignored by him, are not simple. Nanako needless to say, just say Cheng Yao. Although she is much more ordinary than Nanako, she is really true. Not a fuel-efficient lamp!

The slight contempt for Cui Ye has long been clear to my chest, so the slightest good impression I had for Cui Ye was instantly thrown away by her.

Then, it was Cui Ye who accidentally guessed that Nanako was not easy, and then he thought about utilitarianism, and finally he was taught to become a man.

Among them, Cheng Yao also found an opportunity to cheat Cui Ye severely, which was considered relieved, and now Cui Ye took the initiative to put such an opportunity in front of her, how could she let it go?

So when she saw that Jiang Mi was reluctant to speak, she felt that she should have **** by herself, boy, you asked for it, and you can't blame me, sister.

Seeing Cheng Yao's appearance, Nan Xi couldn't help but give a pitiful look at Cui Ye. This guy is really unlucky, Cheng Yao's mouth, you can absolutely doubt life!

"Cough cough..." Cheng Yao cleared her throat and said, "Cui Ye, since you actively asked us to help evaluate your work, then I will do my part. The friendship between the two of us is the same thing, but this It's another story again!

For comics, we have to treat it with a pious and solemn attitude, although once this aspect is involved, there should not be any private relationships in it. Public is public, and private is private. We must understand it, so we say that. , Do you understand?

I’m a straight boy and don’t like to be circumspect, so if you want me to express my feelings, then I’ll definitely be blunt, just say whatever you have, and go straight... So, Cui Ye, you’re sure to listen. Listen to my evaluation? "

Except for Cui Ye, Nanako and the others all glanced at Cheng Yao sideways, how about their friendship in private? What friendship do you have with Cui Ye! Separation of public and private? Are you sure you really think so? Why do I feel that your strong malice is almost overflowing! ?

And your last question? You have said so, even if Cui Ye doesn't want to listen to your evaluation, he can only agree to it, right?

Sure enough, the corners of Cui Ye's mouth twitched. He also realized that things are not simple, but they all said that directly. What else can you tell him to do?

Moreover, Cui Ye attaches great importance to his first Virgo, even though he feels that Cheng Yao may be a little bit ill-intentioned, he still wants to hear her evaluation, anyway, she has already suffered a blow from Nanako. It doesn't matter if you do it again.

Let the storm come harder! I can stand it! Cui Ye thought to himself.

Then, he found that his thinking was too simple. Compared with Cheng Yao's poisonous tongue, Nanako's level was completely at the level of a middle school student, and Cheng Yao, she was the leader of doctoral students.

Before Cui Ye was ready, Cheng Yao said directly, "If I want to evaluate, there are only two words...garbage!"

"Puff...cough cough cough cough cough." Nan Xi who was drinking water directly couldn't hold back a squirt, and the fine water foam folded in the sun to form a small rainbow, although she had long thought of it, Cheng Yao may be a little rude, but he didn't realize that he was so rude to this point!

He didn't leave any face to Cui Ye, and didn't say anything about it, and just started with a sentence of rubbish. This is going to heaven!

Cui Ye's eyelids jumped wildly. Although he had expected it, Cheng Yao's unceremonious evaluation still made him feel angry.

I'm so angry, but I still have to keep a smile on my face, *%@#t$#$%, I cursed in my heart for a while, Cui Ye's mood finally eased, but Cheng Yao's next words made him lose his mind again. Endocrine disorders!

Cheng Yao said lightly: "Well, let me start from the beginning to talk about the evaluation of Cui Ye's work. The name of the work is Dark Blood, Dark Blood? What do you mean?

Don’t you think this name is very low? A meaningless font combination, and it sounds like a strong elementary school student flavor, just like when another elementary school student struggles to use his poor vocabulary to combine super shame and has a hint of childishness in the second, and the dog p An unreasonable move name. "

"Cough cough cough..." Nan Xi coughed again after being choked by Cheng Yao's words, she reminded softly, "Pay attention to the words, be elegant, not so vulgar."

Cheng Yao rolled her eyes secretly, elegant? Haha, what grace do you want when spraying people!

After spraying the name, Cheng Yao started talking about the plot and plot in Cui Ye's work again, "Also, the plot in your work was completely modified according to the giant? And this change has lost the essence. Fill in your original creations indiscriminately, and it will completely change this work into four different things!

Not only can't escape the influence of giants, but also add some messy plots, messy and boring, and the characters of the characters are also applied to the characters in the giants.

Look at the protagonist in your work~lightnovelpub.net~ You obviously want to portray him as an ordinary person, but after being bitten by a vampire, gaining power, you will scream and kill all vampires all day long, not leaving one. , Um, did you temporarily load him an Allen template?

There is also the powerful Captain Vampire Hunter, forgive me for my clumsy eyes, I looked sideways, and I didn't realize how different he was from Captain Livere in the Giant!

So this work of yours is obviously an attacking giant with a magical revision!

Moreover, your demonic transformation does not have the **** and wonderful taste of giants at all. The whole story is imitated, and the imitated is not at all. Every character and plot seems far-fetched and makes people watch. Unusually awkward.

So, I give you this evaluation, it's rubbish! A downright parody, a failure! "

Hiss... Nanako took a deep breath. Cheng Yao's poisonous tongue level is stronger than that of ghost Nanako! Look, after a few words, Cui Ye, who is almost screaming, doubts life!

Seeing Cui Ye’s dumbfounded look, it is obvious that he was shocked by Cheng Yao’s words and gave up thinking. In fact, his work, in general, has many shortcomings, but there are still many advantages in it. .

For example, after his revised world view and settings, it can be seen that he is still very careful, still rigorous and interesting, and some plots can be regarded as remarkable, very novel and interesting.

If you can get rid of the plot that is obviously too heavy by the shadow of the giant, and if you think about it, it will actually be a good work above the standard.

It's a pity that Cheng Yao was purely trying to hit him, deliberately skimming over these things and not mentioning them, only to criticize him by picking up shortcomings.

So, don't be proud of creatures like women, they are sometimes unreasonable.