In front of Nanako, Cui Ye was like a Miyoshi elementary school student listening to the teacher's lecture, listening very carefully to Nanako's explanation of the deficiencies in the work and the points to be revised.

"In my conception, the protagonist went through all kinds of hardships and misfortunes, and then his mentality slowly changed during this period. From a kind and ordinary person with a little weakness, due to despair and hardship, eventually his personality changed to a warrior-like character. Existence, this is the biggest selling point and core.

Therefore, in the middle and early stages of the work, all the plots and foreshadowing are based on this aspect.

Out of this consideration, I am planning to arrange a very important role to witness and even guide the growth of the protagonist along the way, and for this role, I already have a clue.

It was the vampire who attacked the protagonist! That’s how I think. First, that vampire must be a powerful character with a certain special charm. Therefore, the character of this vampire should be a beautiful big sister, with a kind of evil and charm. A dangerous royal sister's breath.

Then, when she attacked the protagonist, I was going to arrange an accident for her to let her die, but not really dying, but in another way, merged with the protagonist and survived the protagonist’s subconscious and In the soul.

And my arrangement for the protagonist is like this. After he was attacked, he finally survived, and he inherited the special power of Yujie vampire, and became a half-human, half-vampire existence.

In this way, the initial foreshadowing has been completed, and the protagonist has gained power, but because he is a human, he has no combat experience before, and his heart is very resistant to this power, so the power he gets is not complete, nor Will use it, but it doesn't really matter, because the seeds of power have already been planted.

As long as Cui Ye, in the future plot trend, make a good idea, gradually guide the protagonist to become familiar with this power, and set him a lot of hardships, let him sublime in the extreme state of suffering and despair.

At that time, it will be the biggest climax in the early and mid-stage of the work. After being tortured, persecuted, and falling into despair, the protagonist burst into despair.

The tribulations and misfortunes he has suffered from childhood to adulthood have completely broken him and despair. At this time, he is no longer the cowardly and kind-hearted ordinary person before, and he will be crowned king!

I can only think about the specific plot direction now. How to do it depends on your own Cui Ye. When you modify the work to this standard, I will do it myself and help you complete it. This climax! "

With just a few words, Nanako constructed a complete plot trend in Cui Ye’s heart. Although Nanako didn’t have much to say about the specific plot, Cui Ye was able to rely on the main storyline alone. It can be seen that as long as it is created, it must be a good work above the standard!

As for the specific plot, Nanako didn't have any suggestions, and Cui Ye was too embarrassed to ask Nanako to help him again. After all, this is his own work. If Nanako was asked to help even this kind of thing, what would he do with Cui Ye?

"Well, thank you, thank you, classmate Lin." Cui Ye couldn't help but thank Nanako. Without Nanako's guidance and careful guidance, it would be so easy for him to determine the path of the work.

So don’t look at Nanako’s lip-synching and just saying a few words, but just such a few words make a work completely washed out and sublimated to the extreme. Such kindness is the grace of enlightenment, Cui Ye said. Shouldn't a few words of thanks? It should be!

Nanako nodded and said, "Well, then you can go back and continue to modify it. Note that, apart from the ordinary plots I reminded you, you must also design carefully, especially the interaction between the characters, and The character of the characters and the plot involved.

These plots and characters, you have to let them play a corresponding role, don’t be too superficial, and you shouldn’t habitually imitate giants, the works you haven’t modified before, the shadows of giants are too heavy, just Even the characters in the plot have the shadows of the characters in the giants, which is not good. "

Cui Ye solemnly replied, "Okay, I will remember it."

The reason why Cui Ye would unconsciously imitate giants before was entirely because he had been studying the manuscripts of the attacking giants, and wanted to learn some comics from it, and because Cui Ye found it difficult to think of when conceiving the plot. What useful inspiration.

That’s why he thought of using the plot section in the giant to fill in the plot after modification, but now he already knows that such an approach is not advisable, because in this way, it can only create a nondescript four-dimension. .

It is not as exciting as the original giant's work, and it does not have its own style, and it will also cause many loopholes and deficiencies in the work. Over time, the plot will completely collapse and can no longer be grasped.

With such lessons learned from the past, as well as Nanako's advice today and the line-up outline of the plot, Cui Ye feels that there is indeed no need to deliberately imitate or borrow from someone else's work.

What he needs to do is to try his best to fill in some ordinary and excessive plots. There is no need to rack his brains to conceive what amazing ideas and links. He only needs to step by step, steadily, and step by step to pave the way for the foreshadowing proposed by Nanako. Just go down.

Cui Ye already knows the specific path. In this way, when creating, it will undoubtedly be much simpler. What he has to grasp is the rationality and stability of the plot, even if the plot is too flat, there is no problem, as long as it does not appear. Any big problem will do.

Moreover, Nanako also said that she will personally help herself perform the great climax of the protagonist's extreme sublimation. In this way, Cui Ye will be even more happy. You must know that for this kind of heart-breaking, tear-burning plot Conceive and grasp.

Even in the Dragon Kingdom, or even the whole world, if Nanako recognizes the second, no one dares to recognize the first!

Because of this kind of abuse plot, Nanako alone dared to write and paint like this in the whole world. If you don’t believe it, look at the works currently on the market. Besides Nanako, who else’s works are such abusers. Item?

The comic atmosphere in this world still remains in the protagonist's invincibility. The protagonist must have good luck, pretending to be slapped all the way, and embarking on the mode of Long Aotian. In short, how cool is the way to come.

Even those well-known cartoonists, their works are just a little more interesting, and the realm of pretending to be forced to face is higher. There is a kind of invisible pretending to be the most deadly meaning.

They are very good at this kind of model, but if they are allowed to draw this kind of plot of abuse like Nanako, it will be their death.

Why do people like to read comics and novels? Isn't it because they want to see the passionate careers of the characters in the works? They will substitute themselves into the characters and follow the characters in the story all the way to adventure until they reach the peak, which will bring them a sense of enjoyment and accomplishment.

But if you abuse a master, try! Abusing the master is equivalent to torturing the masters of officials and masters of readers. If someone lets you be beaten, tortured, or persecuted, how would you feel? Both curses are light, and I definitely feel unhappy in my heart.

Well, of course, except for those with special hobbies.

So they don’t dare, even if it’s because of the plot, they must make the protagonist suffer a little bit of hardship, but they don’t dare to go too far, and after the hardship, they will immediately benefit the protagonists and get a brand new power to offset it. The officials are unhappy.

But Nanako is a wonderful flower that grows in such a big environment. It grows out of silt and is not stained. She likes to abuse the owner when nothing happens. This is a deadly work, and most importantly, Nanako is always doing it. Immortal!

Don’t you see, in Nanako’s works, apart from the fact that the **** of death has no tendency to abuse the master, which step does not have such a bridge?

Zhu Xianli, who whispered under the sword of Zhu Xian, ‘just for love, no complaints’, although there is no specific expression in the full-time hunter, Xiaojie will also be angry and black in the future, making people feel distressed!

The attacking giant has not officially met with the friends. In the first episode, the protagonist Allen watched his mother cruelly eaten by the giant. The future is also difficult, and it is normal to have broken hands and feet.

In the same way, another Sword Art Online that is also prepared for the Comic Contest, do you dare to say that it has no tendency to abuse the owner at all? What are you kidding? UU reading www.uukanshu. The com teammate was annihilated by the group, only he survived. Later, he was given a knife to the ground by the scum management authority dog, and he almost gave himself green.

There is also another movie, the protagonist Liu Subaru, who is called the worst protagonist in the history of life in another world from scratch, good guy, on average, he has to die several times in each episode! Moreover, the scene of Liu Subaru's death in despair in the Evil King Selection is still unforgettable!

Put yourself in the situation and think about it. If you replace yourself with Liu Subaru, Cui Ye feels that he would have a nervous breakdown long ago and be tortured crazy!

But it was such a frenzied plot, and the effect it caused, but the unexpected success, officially because of such despair and predicament, it led to the great success of the work and was topped by people!

Of course, in the end, it was inevitable to be condemned by the group for sending blades.

And what Nanako said about this is this: Everyone misunderstood me, you only saw the despair and predicament they encountered, but ignored what they got!

The ancients have a cloud, and those who make great things must first suffer their minds, work their muscles, hungry their bodies, empty their bodies, and disturb their actions. Therefore, they are tempted to endure, and they have been unable to benefit.

The reason why I want them to suffer such hardship is to make them have a great future and become a great event!

Yes, this is actually love! No matter what you say, this is always love, and I, Teacher Miaomei, is the warrior of love!

And this warrior of love is going to show her unique love to the characters in her works. For such things, Cui Ye said, although this may be a bit sorry for her character, but this is all because of love, I have to Do it.

[The protagonist of the work: Cui Ye, I have a sentence my mom sells criticism, I must tell you! 】

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