Chapter 379 Female author VS game male power trainer (9)

   [The new article has a good beginning, but it lacks a little novelty, and the character modeling is a bit unsatisfactory. 】

   Looking at the comment sent by the editor of "Sheep", Leng Su just remembered that the original owner's old article seemed to have just ended. In the new article submission, I am waiting for the editor's reply to finalize the time to publish the article.

  Leng Su didn't rush to reply to the editor's message, but opened the beginning of the original owner's message and read it.

   Talent is good, writing is good, but experience is the worst.

The stories written by    are also good, but what is lacking is life experience.

   But when he turned his head and thought about it, Leng Su could understand.

   The original owner was a child who was pampered and grew up. The flowers in the greenhouse, apart from this marriage, no one in the Leng family would force her to do anything.

  A novel, a perfect story, the heroine will experience a lot in her life... ups and downs.

  The fullness of the story, as well as the different character shaping of different characters, cause all the causes and results, changes in the heart, etc., the original owner's current pen control ability is still poor.

  The story written by the original owner is sweet and warm, but at the same time it also gives people a sense of dullness.

  Because a life that is too smooth and happy is envied by people but out of reach.

   Leng Su didn't watch the story behind, closed the document, opened and edited the "sheep" chat box.

  【Beautiful Sheep, I suddenly have a new inspiration and plan to revise the story and the beginning. 】

  【Yes, then you can fix it and send it to me as soon as possible. And...I'm a man! ! ! 】

  Leng Su: ... embarrassing! ! !

【Feel sorry. 】

After the two words    were sent, it seemed to be really arrogant over there, and there was no reply to her message.

  Leng Su shook his head and laughed, but he couldn't help but complain: "It's really... a cheapskate."

   After the chat, Leng Su just panicked, in order to avoid the tragic consequences of the original owner running out of food in the plot.

   She simply didn't take a nap, but opened her laptop and started coding in the background of the website.

   "Clap clap clap clap." The sound of the keyboard tapping resounded throughout the afternoon.

   Evening came, when Ji Mu made dinner again and asked her to eat. Leng Su then stopped his hands, looking at the 30,000 words he typed on the computer, he couldn't believe it.

  According to the original owner's memory, she typed up to 6,000 words a day.

   And in just one afternoon, she hit the original owner's amount for five days, inexplicably she will never be driven out by starvation again.

   But what I have to say is that Leng Su is on the hook.

   First of all, her soul power is stronger than that of human beings, and her spiritual power is also strong, and the Karvin situation that the original owner often encountered does not exist for her at all.

  Because... all the stories she writes are real, it is the real encounters she has experienced through so many mission worlds.

   She wrote about the campus plane, and the story of the school tyrant Leng Su and the scumbag Ke Muchen.

  Different from the stories of the iceberg school grass and the domineering school grass on the website, Ke Muchen's innocence and shyness is a unique existence.

   "I'll be right there."

   After responding to Ji Mu who was calling from the door, Leng Su directly published the campus essay she had written.

  The first 10,000 words were published, and in just a few minutes, the website was approved. Leng Su also breathed a sigh of relief, locked the screen and went to eat.

   Looking at the sumptuous dinner on the table, after Leng Su finished it, he began to discuss with Ji Mu about having a meal together.

   "Ji Mu, can I discuss something with you?"

   "Huh? You, what do you want to say?" Someone said defensively.

   (end of this chapter)