Chapter 881 Thirty Years of Hedong Thirty Years of Hexi

  Li Fei was very surprised by the imperial concubine’s request. She asked: "What is the subject matter?"

  Yao Jieyu also looked at the imperial concubine curiously.

  Xiao Xixi: "It is probably about the story of the protagonist going out on a boat and traveling around."

  Li Fei frowned: "What is there to see in this kind of story?"

  Xiao Xixi: "There are so many things to watch.

  For example, you can set the protagonist to be a poor son who is oppressed by the family.

  He was driven out of the house by his brother-in-law and had nowhere to go.

  At this time, you'd better focus on the pen and ink to describe the abhorrence of your brother-in-law, so that the readers hate him so much that he can hardly reach into the book and choke him to death.

  Remember, hatred is an important way to stimulate a sense of identity.

  As long as you can make the reader feel empathetic to the protagonist, your story is half the battle. "

  Li Concubine showed a look of being taught, and asked: "What about then?"

  Xiao Xixi continued.

  "Then you let the down-and-out protagonist join the caravan and head south to a seaside town.

  It is best to use real place names, which will help increase readers’ sense of substitution.

  The protagonist happens to save a drunk here, and when the drunk wakes up, he realizes that he is actually a captain.

  The captain invites the protagonist to join the fleet, and the group set sail.

  Until now, the protagonist did not know that there are many countries on the other side of the sea.

  Those countries have many rare spices, exquisite crafts, and completely different cultures.

  The people living there are very tall, with high noses and deep eyes, which is completely different from the people on our side.

  Some of them have blond hair, some have brown hair, and some have red or black hair.

  Their eyes also have many colors, such as blue, green, and gray.

  Some of them like to eat fish and shrimp raw, some like to cut the beef into large slices and fry them, and some like to put vegetables in bread as a meal.

  What is bread? It's our buns here.

   Back to the topic.

  The protagonist and his party conduct transactions with these foreigners.

  They sell their own country’s goods at prices dozens of times higher than the market, and then purchase all kinds of spice, food and crafts from the local area at a fairly low price.

  After they shipped these goods back to China, the price suddenly increased by more than ten times, and the profit was scary.

  All the people in the boat made a lot of money, and even the protagonist who joined in the fun also made a lot of money.

  After the protagonist tasted the sweetness, he immediately used the money to buy a batch of goods and officially joined the sailing team.

  He used this method of buying and selling to quickly accumulate wealth and married the captain’s only daughter.

  The protagonist later inherited the captain’s fleet and expanded the fleet, eventually becoming the most powerful navigator at sea, saving a wealth of wealth and a family business.

  After learning that the protagonist is well developed, those relatives and friends who once looked down on him came to him, and even the brother-in-law who had driven him out of the house wanted to reassure him.

  It depends on how you develop at this time?

  You can write that they are reconciled, and finally get married with Meimei family.

  You can also write that the protagonist not only stays unmoved, but also slaps the snobbery in the face so that they have a deep understanding of what is meant by thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi, don’t bully the young and poor! "

  Li Fei blurted out without thinking about it: "That must be the snobbery group who want to slap her face hard! At first they ignored me, but today I will let them climb high!"

  Xiao Xixi took a sip of ice milk tea to moisturize her throat.

   "The story is written by you. It is up to you to decide what kind of life you want to give the protagonist."

Concubine Li thought about it carefully, but hesitated: "But the concubine body has never written about a man as the protagonist. The stories written by the concubine before are all based on women as the first protagonist. The concubine body is afraid that she can't write this kind of male protagonist. Main storybook."

  Xiao Xixi suggested.

  "You can try to write first.

  If you can’t write about the male lead’s perspective, then replace the male lead with the female lead.

  The main storyline remains unchanged, just slightly modify the opening storyline.

  For example, the hostess’s family has been doing business for generations, and the family has a big business.

  But because the heroine's father accidentally offended the local tycoon, he was beaten to death.

  All the properties in the family were robbed, and the heroine’s elder brother was also abolished and became disabled.

   Seeing the family business withered, the mother was crying all day long, and the hostess decided to give it a go.

  She disguised herself as a man and mixed into the caravan all the way south, hoping to win a glimmer of hope for her family in the south.

  Coincidentally, the hostess happened to help the captain, and was later invited by the captain to go on a voyage together.

  When the hostess found out about the business opportunities at sea, she wrote to her family and asked them to go south together.

  The family work together to build a business, buy a merchant ship, expand the fleet, continue to travel to and from the sea, earn a lot of wealth, and finally lead the family to the pinnacle of life! "

  Yao Jieyu was fascinated.

  At this time, she clapped involuntarily: "My concubine likes this story!"

  Li Fei asked: "What about the powerful villain who killed the heroine's father before?"

  Xiao Xixi gave her a trick.

  "You can make the heroine's family become the emperor merchant.

  When the hostess entered Beijing to present tributes on behalf of her family, she took the opportunity to file a court case with the emperor, and asked the emperor to appeal for her father’s grievances.

  The emperor ordered someone to thoroughly investigate the case and learned that the facts were exactly as the heroine had said. He was about to arrest the powerful villain and pay the heroine's life to his father.

  The heroine gets revenge, and the family business is taken to the next level. "

  Li Fei heard the ending, she immediately felt that the bad breath that was in her heart came out, and she was relieved.

Yao Jieyu couldn't help asking: "Why are the heroines engaged in career plots? Did the heroine not marry? Who did she marry last? She looks pretty good, right? After seeing her, the emperor won't Want to put her in the harem?"

Concubine Li looked at her with a disgusting look: "Is it not popular to engage in careers? Why do you have to enter the palace? What is good about entering the palace? It is fine if the hostess is lucky enough to be favored. Personality...cough."

  She just swallowed the words “Yin or Sunny”.

  She took a peek at the concubine, and saw that the concubine looked indifferent, so she took the courage and continued.

   "If the heroine also runs into an emperor who does not look at her at all, how will we live in the future? How miserable it will be to keep alive."

  Yao Jieyu also thinks about it, as soon as the gate of the palace is as deep as the sea, it is more comfortable to be at ease outside.

  She urged: "Sister Li Fei, go back and write this story, I really want to read it."

  To be honest, Concubine Li is also a little itchy.

  She is now full of stories about the heroine, Jedi counterattacking the revitalization of the family's face-slapped villain, and I really want to write all the stories in her mind now.

  Xiao Xixi said, "No hurry, I haven't finished talking yet."

  Li Fei and Yao Jieyu both looked at her.

  (End of this chapter)