Transformers In Marvel

v2 ~: Talk about the update, and the plot

Let me talk about the update first. During this time, many people asked me why there was a change. In fact, these are two-in-one chapters, each with four thousand words, which is actually the same as the previous two changes and four thousand. I won't make any tricks on the threshold of four thousand words, because it is not enough for four thousand words, and there will be no 600 yuan full attendance this month. I might as well ask for leave on the day. With my existing author points, I can take two days off each month, and if it exceeds two days, the perfect attendance award will fly~

As for the plot, now the book has reached 1.9 million words. Originally, I estimated that two million words would be good, but two million words would not be enough. I flipped through the outline of the follow-up plot again, and there were still a lot of things left to be written. The protagonist is almost two million words, only the eighth-level sole god, and the road behind is still long...

This is because I chopped off too many things in the first 1.9 million words.

Let’s review it carefully, let’s not say anything else, I cut a lot of things related to the mutants alone. Some people say that the mutants' combat power is too weak, but anyone who reads the comics knows that if the X-Men is open, the reunion is rubbish? Tony's Anti-Phoenix Battle Armor has a record of defeating a Phoenix. Rune Thor and Broken Arm Thor are not convinced. Not to mention Hulk, oba has come out. The strongest form, Immortal Hulk has been officially Landing in the comics (the plan cannot keep up with the changes, the four-handed Hulk previously set in this book is the strongest, and it is now announced to overthrow the immortal Hulk), so the combat power system is really not a problem, but these things have been cut by me.

And Transformers. More than one reader said that I had too little description of Transformers, indeed, because I cut too many things. It's not that it can't be written, but if it is written, the content of this book is too large. This kind of super enrichment is expected to kill many readers.

This also involves a rhythm issue. This book is the Marvel dc collection, and there are a bunch of high-ranking bosses. How strong are these big guys? Strong enough to make the infinite gem Thanos of the multiverse rank become a trivial character. Many people are talking about the power of the movie Thanos, slamming xxx. In fact, readers familiar with comics know that the infinite gem Thanos is the bottom brother even in the Marvel comic universe. If you count the dc side ( DC has opened a corner of the Almighty Universe, and quietly revealed that the world inside the wall of origin is just an ant in the vast void, and there are countless multiverses outside the wall. And Marvel has not moved yet. , The perspective still stays at the xth world. I forgot the specific world. Anyway, there are still several multiverses that are comparable to or even stronger than the multiverses where the Avengers and X-Men are located. I just don’t know when Marvel. Draw the content of the Almighty Universe).

Explain clearly these complex worldviews and combat power systems, as well as the gods that many readers who do not read comics have never heard of. They have already occupied a lot of space. If you add the Transformers scenes, the entire book will be Inflated like a snowball, this kind of invisibly slow and multi-rhythmic sense makes me worry that I will lose a lot of readers.

The tempo issue ~lightnovelpub.net~ is the core issue of the web. Some readers say that I write too fast in some places, and big events erupt one after another. It makes him a little bit painful... I can only smile, I don’t. Having the ability of a great **** to move clouds and flowing water can only take the lesser of the two harms. It may be a little bit "dry" sometimes, but it is better than "water", right? Even if a batch of readers are killed by drought sometimes because of too much dryness, at least the content is solid and does not contain a lot of parallel imports to buffer real time.

It is essentially a problem, rhythm, in order to keep the rhythm as much as possible (this book does have a rhythm problem in some places, but I can only say that I have tried my best), I have cut off too many things on the outline. Otherwise, at the current stage of writing, even if the total number of words is less than three million, two hundred and sixty-seven are still more than enough. When the book is finished, it is estimated that it will be...4 million words? No matter how bad it is, there will be 3.5 million.

There is also the heroine Wanda. I am not good at writing emotional dramas, so sometimes I deliberately reduce the depiction of the feelings of the male and female heroes. The disadvantage is that some readers will feel that something is missing, but again, the emotional point of writing is called drama Poison, I can feed you this emotional poison as little as possible by doing this. If you are poisoned to death, who will read my book? Right? It is better to cut off part of the emotional drama.

I wrote so much before I knew it, it was a staged summary, and then, um, I found that I only have one chapter saved, so I can only update hiahiahia later today~~~