As a senior person who is familiar with various novels and has watched various TV series, Yao Bianliang has done a lot of research on the "poisonous spots" and "thunder spots" in the eyes of the public.

For ancient romance, there are only a few unacceptable plots.

Yao Bianliang: "First, the heroine's background needs to be revised."

"The heroine is not a lady from an official family. She has no noble blood and a distinguished family background worthy of the hero. She is just an ordinary girl who was sold by her parents on the way to flee famine."

"After entering the brothel, the procuress told her that you are a geisha who sells her performance but not her body. But when those rich and powerful masters want her body, she still has to submit."

Although it is only a simple setting modification, in this way, the perfect love story in the eyes of the audience will be completely changed beyond recognition.

A male and a female protagonist? No, the male and female protagonists of this TV series are not in the same place.

The heroine is no longer the "clean" girl who entered the brothel, on the contrary, she has slept with many men. Among these men, there are many disgusting pig-headed men, greasy men with big ears, and even old men who are obsessed with sex...

When the public watches this kind of drama, what they emphasize is a sense of substitution. Take the initiative to substitute yourself into a talented man and a beautiful woman, have a romantic love, and dream a sweet dream.

Therefore, in the ancient romance dramas filmed today, almost all the heroines are innocent. There is no screenwriter who dares to write this kind of experience for the heroine - whoever dares to write like this will be scolded to death by the audience.

Since no one dares to write, let her create this brand new subject!

Yao Bianliang felt that when the time came to refine the details, he could also describe in detail how disgusting the heroine's "benefactors" were, and how miserable the heroine was when she was forced to pick up the guests.

This item alone will definitely be able to poison a lot of viewers.

Of course, just this poison point is not enough.

Yao Bianliang continued: "Secondly, when the heroine is taken back to the palace by the hero, what greets her is not a life of luxury, but a deeper level of powerlessness and despair."

The audience saw the heroine being bullied in the brothel, so they naturally expected the heroine to marry into the palace, and then slap all kinds of vicious villains in the face.

But Yao Bianliang will not meet the audience's expectations. If it makes the audience happy, can it still be called an aggrieved plot?

The heroine did not get married in a good way, on the contrary, because of her status as a prostitute, she did not have a lot of red makeup, no cheers, and no crowds of onlookers.

She just got into a small sedan chair and entered the palace through a side door on an ordinary morning.

A climactic plot that should have been so refreshing was just told in an understatement. It would be strange if the audience didn't feel aggrieved!

"The next big part of the plot is not much different from the original text," Yao Bianliang said, "However, I think it is only necessary to keep the part where the heroine is oppressed and bullied. It’s good to weaken all of them.”

Do you think that after being redeemed, you will be free and become a concubine in the palace, you will be able to get rid of the mud and enjoy the infinite scenery?

wrong! Big mistake!

The hostess just changed from a slave of a group of people to a slave of one person.

She still has no human rights, is still looked down upon by others, and can only be reduced to a plaything of the powerful class.

The days in the palace were beautiful on the surface, but in reality they were not much better than the days in the brothel.

The heroine did not slap the villain in the face and kill the Quartet, on the contrary, because she came from Fireworks Lane with a low status, she received a lot of blank stares and ridicule.

Later, with newcomers coming in from the mansion, the male lead's favor became no longer so reliable.

"Finally one day, the heroine decided to run away and leave this terrible palace. But her plan was finally revealed and she was captured again." Yao Bianliang continued following this train of thought.

The heroine wanted to escape, but the hero captured her and swore sovereignty on the spot. At first glance, this may seem like a common romantic formula.

According to common sense, the heroine has been abused in this way, and there will be two directions at this time.

Either completely blacken and use the hero's love to climb to the top step by step;

Or self-abuse in despair, let the hero regret his past, and start the chasing wife crematorium mode.

But Yao Bianliang naturally wouldn't follow the routine.

The corners of her lips curled up slightly, and she spoke out the last poisonous point of the play: "After this incident, the heroine completely lost the favor of the hero. Finally, at a banquet for elegant men, a master fell in love with her." Mistress."

"The male protagonist gave up the female protagonist to the other party. This incident has become a good story."

Mo Youqian: "!!"

Mo Yougan didn't reply for a long time, Yao Bianliang reckoned that the other party was probably also shocked by this sudden poisonous point.

In ancient times, there were laws, concubines, and business transactions—that is to say, concubines are only the private property of the host and hostess, and of course they can also be given away.

The logic of the male protagonist in this play is very simple, you are my concubine bought back, so naturally it belongs to me.

I can make you live, let you die, sell you or give you away, but I can't let you go.

So in the end, the female lead and the male lead didn't have the poignant be, nor the perfect he, but were given away as items by the male lead!

Moreover, the gift was a middle-aged man with a big belly, who was old enough to be the heroine's father.

Let me ask you, is this plot poisonous enough?

Yao Bianliang was overwhelmed by his own imagination.

It's such a **** drama, you'll only watch it when you've got a hole in your head.

Mo Youqian was also stunned, and asked after a while: "And then?"

Obviously, he still has a little bit of expectation for this extremely poisonous story.

"And then?" Yao Bianliang shook his head, "There's no more after, just this ending, I think it's pretty good."

As for whether the heroine will kill the hero?

Don't think about it, if the heroine really turns back, then this drama will become a cool novel.

Yao Bianliang paused, and then added: "Of course, we can also take a simple photo in the follow-up, how miserable the heroine is in that master's mansion."

In ancient times, even if a concubine who was born as a prostitute entered a wealthy family, it would be difficult to change her fate. The better ones sang and played in Fuchu, and the worse ones even had to pick up guests and entertain people in Fuchu.

The main family will not allow them to have children at all. Once it is found that she is secretly pregnant, she will either be aborted or die.

For example, in the original plot, the heroine gave birth to three sons, and the probability of the sons finally getting fame is very small.

Mo Youqian: "..."

When Mo Youqian heard the last word, he couldn't help being silent.

Compared with this plot, how can the script he saw before be called "aggrieved" at all? It's completely insignificant, and there is no comparison.

Even the system expressed shock: "Host, isn't your script too poisonous..."

This is simply disgusting the audience on purpose, wandering on the edge of breaking the rules.

Yao Bianliang was clearly prepared: "System, you are wrong to say that. The prostitutes and concubines in ancient times were miserable. I respect history and design the plot according to the true colors of history."

Just kidding, respecting history, how can it be regarded as deliberately disgusting the audience?

system:"…"

Although there is something wrong, it seems impossible to refute it.

Seeing that the system stopped talking, the corners of Yao Bianliang's lips rose, and he let out a long sigh of relief: "Mr. Mo, what do you think of this script?"

Mo Youqian was silent for a moment, wanting to say something, but couldn't find anything wrong for a while.

In the end, he could only say: "I feel very good."

Isn't it very good?

Just listening to Yao Bianliang's simple description, he had already reached the point of having a heart attack. It is conceivable how terrifying it would be if this kind of plot was really filmed.

The audience couldn't help but curse after seeing this kind of plot. There will be no other possibility at all, let alone the possibility of a comeback.

———

Anhui University, senior dormitory of Chinese Department.

Xie Waner, a senior student who is an online novel author and part-time screenwriter, is sitting cross-legged on the bed and typing. Her fingers tapped on the keyboard quickly, and there was a clicking sound in the quiet dormitory.

She is not a well-known screenwriter, and her grades in online novels are also average. The university courses are not too busy. In her spare time, she relies on writing novels to earn some living expenses.

Of course, it was precisely because of the unsatisfactory data of her works that people from Kuiqian Entertainment took a fancy to her and became the screenwriter of the new drama.

"Phew, I'm finally finished." After typing the last word, Xie Wan'er stretched her waist in relaxation, and moved her sore wrist.

As usual, she checked her novel from beginning to end. The latest chapter is another climax. The heroine slaps the newly favored concubine in the face, making her completely disgusted by the hero.

After reading it, Xie Wan'er made a pertinent evaluation: "Oh, these are some cerebral palsy plots."

In order to write a novel that can make money, it is really difficult for her!

With mixed feelings, Xie Waner updated the latest chapter. And at this moment, new content popped up in the message bar.

The note name of this contact is "Gold Master Dad", Xie Wan'er didn't dare to neglect, so she clicked on it quickly.

Father of the gold master: "Hello screenwriter, after we showed the script to the heroine, she made some suggestions for revision. Now there are a few small points that I hope you can modify. If there is no problem on your side, we can pay you Double pay."

This sentence is followed by a txt file, which is obviously the modification requirement this time.

Xie Wan'er was a little unhappy when she saw that Party A wanted to modify the script by herself.

Want to change the script again? God knows, what she hates most is others criticizing her work.

However, when she saw the words "pay double," that emotion disappeared.

Isn't it just to change the script? She will start to change it immediately, and promise to change it until you are satisfied.

"Okay, let me take a look." Xie Wan'er replied, and then clicked on the document named "Revision Request".

"Hey, Party A is going to ask you to change the script again?" The roommate noticed Xie Wan'er's situation and came over curiously.

The roommate is also very familiar with Xie Wan'er's situation.

In order to make money, this sister writes romantic novels with wonderful plots on the Internet every day. Sometimes, in order to meet the needs of the editor and the market, she has to modify the plot, changing the weird plot into another even weirder plot.

"That's not it," Xie Wan'er sighed helplessly, "I don't know, what kind of plot do I want to change this time."

At this moment, Xie Wan'er was ready to change the script even more outrageously.

According to the usual practice, Party A's requirements are nothing more than a few.

For scenes such as "the heroine accidentally falls down, the hero saves the beauty, the two hug each other and circle in slow motion", or "the heroine and the heroine accidentally fall down, the two kiss together, and the heroine's eyes suddenly widen", Xie Waner At the request of Party A, it has been written more than ten times.

The roommate also sighed: "There is no way, even if we want to write some in-depth plots, Party A will not agree."

When they first entered the circle, it's not that they didn't try to write some in-depth and connotative plots.

But helplessly, most investors and directors will not like such a plot. Moreover, it is impossible for this kind of novel to be popular in the online literature market.

Being forced to write something you don't like for money and creating it with passion for love are completely different things.

Therefore, although these novels written by Xie Wan'er can make money, the statistics are not good. It belongs to the type that can be seen, but not outstanding at all.

"Hey, Party A's request this time seems a bit strange..."

The roommate frowned and looked at the content of the document, and then his eyes widened.

Xie Wan'er noticed that her roommate's mood was not right, so she also started to watch.

Well, change the identity of the heroine to an "unclean" prostitute, so she can't marry into the palace; let the heroine suffer all kinds of suppression in the palace, and weaken all the content that slaps the face and abuses the scum...

In the end, the male protagonist actually treated the female protagonist as an object and gave it to the master in the next door house? !

"Damn, what exactly does your Party A want?" The roommate was stunned, "Are they crazy? It's impossible to shoot a drama just to scold them."

This is an extremely poisonous script at all, as if deliberately filmed to disgust the audience, all kinds of buffs will be stacked.

Especially at the end, the male protagonist gave the female protagonist as a gift, and the one who gave it was a bad old man. This kind of unfinished ending is enough to make any audience break their defenses.

The roommate swallowed. She deeply felt that if Party A wasn't crazy, then she herself was crazy.

It can't be that Party A was stimulated and deliberately made a TV series to retaliate against the society, just to disgust the audience.

Is this a human being?

Thinking of this, the roommate couldn't help but turned to look at Xie Wan'er.

However, Xie Wan'er's reaction was different from what she had imagined.

After the initial shock, she didn't show any expression of doubting her life. Instead, she frowned and began to think seriously.

"These revisions seem a bit strange..." she murmured in a low voice.

The roommate was helpless: "Isn't this nonsense?"

She had never seen such a weird revision in her life.

Xie Wan'er looked thoughtful: "According to Party A, these revisions were made by the heroine. However, if the script is changed into a bad movie with a lot of poisonous points, what good will it do for her, the future heroine? "

The roommate was taken aback and frowned.

Indeed, if a drama is not good, the actors will be the first to be scolded.

Other dramas were unfinished because the screenwriter was not skilled enough to hold such a huge structure, and the final ending was unsatisfactory, so they were scolded as unfinished.

But looking at it now, it's obvious that this actress did it on purpose—deliberately making the show full of poisonous points, and deliberately making it unfinished!

She can obviously act in a normal costume romance drama, so why bother to deliberately act in an unfinished movie with full of poisonous points?

This is totally illogical.

Just when her roommate was extremely puzzled, Xie Wan'er suddenly slapped the table, her eyes lit up.

"I see! So, that's what she meant."